All Comments on 'White Box Romance'

all have been there. That's a problem for online

relationships and lost poets. I found this an easy

and emtional read. I loved it.

I agree with Sandspike. I love the visual and how straigt forward it goes from happy to...well we all know what.

Waiting and wanting and hoping ... when we know ours is the only side still burning. Nice job! ~Imp

You never know and putting faith in bits and bytes is a huge leap..you shared how many people feel with a simple eloquence.

*hugs*

v~

that many have felt, wonderfully.

I love it when I read something that touches my heart, thank you.

Sailor

Haven't we all been there? Wonderfully summarized

honey of a poem~

very creative~

...honey. Poetry as it should be: simple, astute, and utterly evocative of a person's feelings. Very well written, my kitten!

Nice work on a subject many of us have experienced. ;)

this really speaks to me. the essence of poetry to me is "Does it make me feel something?" This really, really does. Absolutely wonderful.

Loved this poem Honey.

It speaks from the heart.. to the soul.

<Smiles>

We could wish a horrible *virus pox* on his err*hard drive*

wanna? <grins>

Keep'm Comin'

It speaks volumes, and hits you square with real life. Thank you for this. It does touch deep.

Great Peace............Billy

Coversational in approach....helps to put across the sense of loss you feel. Thanks ,Honey

Oh boy, this is a killer! Written wonderfully but you almost made me cry. Good job drawing the reader in. I know this feeling :sigh:

Beautiful, babe. This is one I can truly relate to and understand. Amazing how things seem to change so suddenly isn't it? Makes you want to ask questions, but then you can't ask all the right ones. *sigh* Beautiful work hon.

I like how the loss sneaks up on you in this one.

ty,bd

Mtnman2003 - 6/24/15