All Comments on 'A Family Holiday'

Had sex with my sistershe was ovalating pumped my sperm in her cunt called me week later iam pregnant with your kid in me I told her your moving in with me so we can have more kids

Whatta douche ! Joe's pretty much a jack-off idiot . How ever did he even get in a story with such a fox as Ann ? She really deserved better ! Nice story ,though . Thanx !

Second time that I read this story. I really liked it. Nice build up to when they consummate their desires.

One of my favourite stories of all time! Nice slow build-up, bit of romance, and sex scenes that make me HARD! I keep cumming back for more!

An excellent story and good to read one from a Brit.

Very good, no word waisted, only what was needed to get imagination and cock going.

Bloody great read.

Read this over two years a go. Just re-read it and it's still as hot as ever x

Cumming in sister not knowing if she will get knocked up would be wonderful. The first time, the second and third time.

(11/7/2022) Great story and very well written. Thanks for keeping it between the two sibs and not making it a swinging family orgy. I'm into together-happily-ever-after endings but I understand that this ending would be the more realistic. I would have liked to have read about what happens when they get together again at Christmas and New Year. Maybe then the story would have ended in a together happily ever after. But alas, this story is Twenty years old. Five stars.

Very good story. Would like to have such a family full of fucking. The end is a little disappointing though..

Of all the incest genres I'm a big fan of the mother/son relationships. But I enjoyed this one between sister and brother.

This is a true story, and I didn't end up fucking a family member. In high school I approached my older sister Jo Jo and told her that as a man I was so attracted to her. In that time period there were these erotic adult novels that you could buy. My favorite books were those where family member fucked each other. This one book dealt with a brother and sister. The younger brother ended up taking his older sister's virginity. After reading the book I approached my sister and told her that the book that I was giving her could not be read by anyone except her. I made her promise that she would keep it a secret and she agreed. As I walked away from her, I told her: "I wish that I was the brother in the book and that she was the sister". A few weeks went by, and she never spoke to me about the book. Our mother never approached me, so I felt safe that Jo Jo never told mom about the book. One Saturday night while mom was visiting our aunt Marge I was watching TV in the living room when Jo Jo came out of her room to go to the kitchen to get a glass of water. She was wearing these sexy red teddy. Walking back to her room she stopped and looked straight at me and said: "What are you watching Tomas?" I swear I saw lust in her eyes. God in heaven she was so beautiful. But I was a virgin and in the last second, I back off.

To this day I don't know what might have happen had I approached. On my 30th birthday Jo Jo text me and invited me to lunch. I text back and said yes. While at lunch she asked did I get everything I wanted for my birthday. I told her no. She asks what it was I didn't get. I told her..."Not seeing you in that beautiful red teddy you worn that Saturday night years ago when we were teenagers." I wasn't that shy young 16-year-old boy. I was a 30 year old man who made love to many women but this one was the one who got away.

To my delight Jo Jo smiled warmly back at me.

Lovely story. It seems that these two love one another as a man loves a woman. They are brother and sister, and that bond will never go away. But when he is buried deep inside of her, and they look into each other's eyes, and she knows that he is about to cum, and he knows he is about to fill her womb with his seed. There has to be that thought between them of the thought of him fucking a baby into her.

God, if this was me, I would confess my love to my sister and tell her that I want a life with her as a man and a woman. I would confess that I want to make babies with her and even if we had to tell our family of our love....I would make this woman my woman.

Am I sick because I feel this way?

One of the problems that many authors of erotic material is that they don't know when to end a good story. I give you credit. You could have turned this into an all-out family orgy, but you restrained yourself from making a well written story into a sordid excuse of smut. yeah, I would like to see Joe with the younger sister and maybe Paul have sex with Anne. But it would have had to be logical that all four would be okay with such an arrangement. Developing that story line would take real craft of storytelling skill.

Steamy all throughout! Disappointing ending though - figured more to come (cum) once home; then again perhaps a follow-up in the works. Great job, author!

Very good story. Lots of good sex ... and a ton of love too. Would have been even better if Beth had caught on and wanted a bit of brotherly love, too. But you can't have everything. Fucking one beautiful sister is fantastic enough.

I gave it a "Five" but I do agree with "Anonymous...the Epilogue was dissatisfying. I cannot picture them NOT getting together again...maybe even contemplating a way to make it a permanent relationship. The epilogue seemed "rushed" as if to say, "...and they lived happily ever after as sister and brother." Thee End.

WOW! Great story

I gave it a "4" - the epilogue was a letdown. Otherwise, very good.

Excellent well written , explicit reality, picturing the scenes; exciting all the way through.

Beautiful, so sexy.

Although slightly unrealistic at the beginning of the encounters, it was well told.

WAUW !

My fifth time enjoying this story. Takes me to a new level of horny. Flow and build up with the constant foreplay, resulting in the hottest most erotic sexual act, Incest is for sure the best. Sucked my cousins hard cock when I was 13 been sucking cock every chance I get. I’m 48 now, lost count at about 50 different dicks. All races shapes and sizes.

One of the best stories I have read .with a mind like your,s for story-telling,you should carry on and give us some more, I bet you have a dozen some where in your scrap book.

Excellent read. We do hope you get to be with Ann soon. Who knows, you may even get Beth too xx

Great story. Cool premise. Well executed. Loved the developing relationship between the two leads. Family dynamics are well caught. I’d be curious where these two are now and how their relationship changed or endured over the years.

This is the first story of yours that I've read and its been a quite a while since you posted this one but I gotta take sometime to appreciate this work.

This is definitely up there with some of the hall of fame stories. Even though you took a simple premise and the build up at the start might look a bit clichéd but you quickly switched that up by introducing voyeurism and that bought a different type of build up to the story, it helped the main characters break their moral barriers/walls without directly addressing it which was a really clever way to do it. The main characters casually touch or grope each other and that becomes their new norm which happened due to them exploring each other through voyeurism and since the build up is so good, so when they do cross the last few lines it feels deserved and it's really well executed so kudos for that. It also included some of the kinks I enjoy like the subtle inclusion of 'freeuse'

And I've seen a few people complain about the ending of the story which I can see why people thought that they were gonna get together at the end but to me this is clearly a story where the siblings are put in a certain scenario which leads them to have sex and this story had great sexual tension/build up which smoothly transitioned to them breaking their barriers. Of course, this story showed the characters care for each other a bit more than other normal build up stories which definitely added depth to the characters but it doesn't make it a complete romance story which it is not. The author even made them mention that the sexy times are gonna end once the vacation ends and it makes perfect sense for the ending to be what it is.

Nevertheless I really enjoyed this story and I would like you to return to literotica someday and continue writing these great stories. Easy 5 stars.

Well done. This certainly needs to be continued! Everyone makes suggestions but it's obvious you have a vivid and wonderful imagination. Please, add another 20 or so chapters... lol

Great story. I truly enjoyed it. And was sad to see it end. You could feel the love they share.

One of the best brother sister storries I have read.

really well written and not at all rushed. i was hoping for a follow up but doesn't look like there is to be one. a crying shame.

I love the way it was done.

Great stuff. Was kind of wishing it would completely turn into a family affair with Beth and her boyfriend would join in the last night in the hot tub or in their room since they were a little tipsy. Would have been even hotter. But still great as written.

i really enjoyed this story. very sexy. i just wish Joe and Ann could have stayed together.

Really enjoyed reading this story. Good to read that protection was mentioned as in a lot of stories nothing is said bout using protection.

Read your story in 5 sections and ended up wanking to each section. Super horny story.will take a look at your other stories too see if has sexy

The ending was disappointing. I wanted them to end up together...

I really did just want to read the end- dried cum and reasons for not wearing panties- but the drawn out pace and build up was great, and well worth reading! It reminded me of actual life events that take time but are really substantial at include epic endings.

Really fun read!

I have read lots of stories here for some time. This one ranks right up there with the best. Well written and definitely very sexy. Probably the very best that I can recall. I most certainly hope to hear more about “ A Family Holiday “ Excellent story, thank you.

Oh my that was great I am so wet from it. Thank you

Amazing hope to read more

My wıfe wanked her brothers regularly on holıdays and at home, sometımes doıng them all together. She contınued after theır and our marrıage. She gave them blowjuobs and let them rıde on her bare ass, but not ın ıt. She has no problem wıth ıt.

very very hot and plausible humane erotic in the extreme incest story I have read in a long time

with a sister like Ann I wish I had a sister like her to be besotted with her!

gorgeous descriptions of sex and just loved the story I am so glad they both watched

Beth having sex in the hot water tub and Joe also watched her naked body

To continue to fight, in the months ahead, for my own, personal vindication

Would almost completely consume the attention and energy

Of the country

And the Congress

At a time

When

That energy would be better addressed to the Great Issues of

Peace Abroad and Prosperity (without inflation)

At

Home

Therefore, I shall Resign the Presidency, effective at Noon Tomorrow.

Vice-President Ford will be sworn in as President

At that hour

In this

Office

Really, the way it was designed and formed can make real impact on readers. I really think that, the length and the content were just appropriate which made it interesting. I enjoyed how story ended with the final fuck; that part made it more realistic to readers. I encourage writer to keep writing with such endings for boosting the interest in your audience. keep it up!

I think is a nice story, but not ended, please, give us a news chapters about, as they are living as a husband & wife, in burning love.

In another way, I think the author is not English, or has ben for long time in the USA.

English people don`t say "morning", they say "good morning" always.

Well description of the Teide Vulcan and environments (I was there some years ago).

A good story brought together well. The only downer is the fact that Jo didn't get his sister pregnant.

In a continuing story have sister and her son move in with brother Joe and live together as husband and wife and have many children.

awesome story

Their should definitely be a part 2 since Ann seemed to want to have her brothers baby... Great story, beautifully written and you surely get a real feel for the characters and how this trip ultimately changed them! 5 Stars all the way!!!

Such a loving and erotic story! Until it's abrupt and anticlimactic ending😕 It was sooo close, but much enjoyed none the less. Thanks for sharing!

What a beautiful, gentle, sweet, and loving story, unlike so many of the stories on this site which emphasize the opposite. I hope to see a continuing story, maybe when the two of them decide to move in together (to save money by sharing living quarters and expenses, of course!) and raise her child together--and perhaps have one of their own.

I wish they would decide to meet now and then, in hotel room or the like. Or that they could camouflage their meetings as regular brother-sister meets. They are much too close not for this to happen.

just wish he would submit more stories here. It has been too long.

Yes, well brother dear (who just wrote) didn't quite tell the whole tale. Men seldom do. I'll have to say that I was, and am not, the picture of the perfect playboy centerfold. I had wide hips and rather small breasts and my hair was naturally red and frizzy. Grey and frizzy these days. We met at that beach because there were no other people on the stretch we were on. I wanted to do the nude beach on spring break, but not brave enough to go to the busy end. We met and stared at each other. He came and shot his stuff on my bush just by looking at me. I couldn't believe it, and I could not help it. I loved him. Full on romantic love at first sight sort of love though we'd seen each other every day, almost, for our whole lives. Yes, he bought the motel. But room 17 (our room) is for our use only and the only children I have born were concieved in room 17. Never remodeled, 17 is like a '70's time capsule and its our little world. Still with the fuzzy bullfighter picture on the wall and the lava lamp with pink tile in the bathroom. I love it so much and I love your story. I hope Ann and Joe get together for more, it can be so wonderful. A woman will never find a better male role model than her own brother and no other man can love her the way he can.

Spent a week in Miami on spring breal. Sis and I both went, but from different Universities so we didn't even know we'd meet. We met on a famous nude beach in Florida and couldn't avoid the fact that her nipples were hard and my dick was standing at attention. We spent the whole week in OUR motel room. You know the kind. Pastel colors outside with plastic flamingos in the grass by the office and 'Magic Fingers' bed vibrator and brown shag carpet. But it was like we were rehearsing for our respective honeymoons later in life. We laughed and loved, because we already loved each other. Had for years, and laughed at ourselves at taking so long to figure out what we needed. We've each married others and had kids, but never given each other up. I don't have to wonder like the character in this story. We meet at 'our' motel frequently, since I bought it! Such wonderfulness.

The voyeurism crap in page 3 was a let down and the epilogue really killed it in the end, 4 stars other than those.

This was a great story. I would have loved to have had it happen to me with my older sister. Really enjoyed the story.

This was a great romance. Happiness when they planned to go, sadness for Anne's failed marriage, Happiness during the week while they laughed and loved, and a little sadness at parting, but always happiness that they'll always be friends. I suspect that, the way it is written, continueing after the Holiday would have been a mistake for these two. I've read this several times and have enjoyed it every time and it doesn't get old for me. Thanks for a great story.

it was sad when they parted I thought you would have wrote them as coming together , he becoming the love of her life , and her having a child with him

I love how you developed their relationship. You didn't let Joe take advantage of Ann when she was fragile, but let her take charge after her self-confidence & self-image have been somewhat restored. This is as much a Love story or Erotic Coupling as it is incest, though that element is certainly here. I like how you didn't require her to become pregnant or to string out a story line which many times in real life is a one time thing that brings wonderful memories. Good Show!

Joe, I guess rumors of your death has been exaggerated. I do have to wonder why you haven't submitted more stories lately. Maybe you think you peaked on this one and anything else would be disappointing. If so, I agree it would be hard to top, but there is no shame in writing its peer.

I read all 69 comments to date. The sheer number blows my mind. Yes, a few didn't like it and I respect their opinion while failing to understand their viewpoint. Most of us think it was OUTSTANDING and deserves all the praise it got. Thanks for making the effort to produce such a story.

Anonymous just said - "Blatant plagiarism! This story appeared on the XNXX website about 10 years ago, - entitled `Ann Is Happy Again', - it has been copied virtually word for word here."

Well, I was a bit upset about this! I mean, I wrote the story! So I checked it out, and yes, it is on that site. Someone posted it on 6th July 2005. Having posted it on here in December 2003 I think I know who the plagiarist is, and it's not me...

But thanks for commenting, anonymous.

As an aside, thanks to everyone who has commented on this...I haven't been on here for years, and it's been very nice to read some of what people have said. Thanks :)

This story appeared on the XNXX website about 10 years ago, - entitled `Ann Is Happy Again', - it has been copied virtually word for word here

Excllent Story sir! Please do keep things coming. I liked the build up, and the emotional connect, and finally the practical ending! I give it top rating. :)

Enjoyed all of it. Glad when they finally "made love." Interesting developements that kept the vacation alive without it becoming only a sex tale/tail. Believe I would enjoy any continuation/expansion of the story line. Thank you.

I quite enjoyed this one, but the title was a little misleading. Joe and Ann sharing a room and spying on their parents, and later their sister and her boyfriend.

I skipped to the end after their first fuck, hoping one of their parents would come in to wake them in the morning, and catch them asleep in the same bed.

Then while Beth and Paul were screwing in the spa, Joe could fuck his sexy Mom while his sister got her cunt filled by her horny Dad's throbbing cock.

hope you write a sequel to this story! i will be looking forward to it!

My God!!!

What a booooooooooooring shit!!!

That in the end.. - we both WANT????

- Or... do NOT WANT?

Surely that's all you can squeeze it on ONE page!

A very credible and well-written story. Obviously, you have visited the island as the local knowledge shone-through.

Though the story is quite long, I really like it. The story seemed so real. Keep up the good work.

Its very nice story and I enjoy reading. I was very hot and enjoy this story.

had a great wank reading your story wish I had a sister to fuck

this type of thing ruins family relationships, when they got home he would avoid her since she basicly abandoned him. of course the way she teased him at the begining would have driven him away in the first place. more than likely he would have sleept on the patio to avoid her. just another unfinished unrealistic waste of time. wish he had deleted all his stories before leaving.

Good story, blew my load a couple times, while my wife & I read this erotic story

I really enjoyed this story. Thank you.

This is no story, sounds too much like the recollection of the past. Damn good either way.

This is the best Incest story that I have read!!!!

I had heard that he had passed away and also heard he was sick and in a home.! Don't really know but he was a good writer and I just wish one had ended with them on there own and happy ever after.* But he wrote it and thought better against it I guess.

A shame that writers have to come and go like they do but we all change one way or another and hopefully for the better.

And everybody say a prayer for JOE3.

Thanks

JBL3

If they can move somewhere else and stay together,that would b g8.

One of the best stories on here. Sadly this guy has not wrote anything in several years. I wish he would start writting again.

That was a wonderful story- great pace and so sweet and romantic. It's really left me wanting to know where they go from there. I loved every minute reading it.

after the way she teased him the first few days and nights he would have stayed on the terracewhen everyone else went to bed and slept there. if she asked why later he would flat out tell her he was uncomfortable with her teasing then walk away.KEEP IT SOMEWHAT REALISTIC AND BELIEVABLE TEASING SUCKS.

Why did it have to end????????????

it was a great read but needs to continue and possibly add the other sister and parents into it all.

A well written story, i thoroughly enjoyed reading it from begining to end.

really?? that's it?

very boring: 6 pages where nuffin happens

it was a great story i really enjoyed it .. except for the ending did not like that at all !

Continue., thius i am mzing story,, they both have to continue

Wonderful story. Glad to see the sister was divorced and not cheating. Wanted to see them continue their love after the holiday but I guess it wasn't meant to be.

Write more like this please. Thanks!

great story

Nicely spaced out story, as a holiday should be. The feel of a leisurely holiday never goes away.

And ended with the right feeling of a bit of a tragedy that makes it feel just right.

loved it! and themes like this dont normally intrigue me but o my! you should do at least a little more to it!:)

u gotta continue. cant end it like this when u did such a good job till now.

this story is so good.

It cannot end, they love each other so much, they need to be together

New chapter woul fix this

this story was great, too bad they didnt keep going when they got home

good but the end was to sad since she had a different last name from her marriage it would have been easy for them to move another town and date then get married why did they have to stop so unfair please do a second chapter with them getting together

I'm such a romantic that I would have had them together forever, but I still loved it. It was one of the best stories I have ever encountered on this site. Thank you for sharing it.

. . . I have read on Literotica - or anywhere for that matter. I was expecting the others to get involved, but I am glad they didn't - it made it more believable. Well done!