All Comments on 'A Fine Romance'

by glynndah

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TE999TE999about 17 years ago
A fine story, indeed

Clever premise. Sexy and well written. Good luck in the contest.

RogueLurkerRogueLurkerabout 17 years ago
:)

I suspect there'd be quite a line up of volunteers for this kind of testing. Definitely a fun story.

Kain__ThornnKain__Thornnabout 17 years ago
*sweating*

Oh, my, wow, um, ooooooooo... Your writing style reminds me a bit of mine, your choice of words is similar to mine, excellent read!

HoodmanHoodmanabout 17 years ago
Nice twists!

Nice use of apparent contradictions: Nephew working on a "romantic" job as adult toy test researcher, "spinster" applying for a job testing the toys, but actually not a spinster at all. Surprisingly tender and realistic (e.g. using a condom). Good dialogue.

MebulbousMebulbousabout 16 years ago
Gotta love the idea

Tis a novel story line.

Keep em coming.

fafhrd09fafhrd09over 11 years ago
Good Little Witch Scores!

A Fine Romance was fantastic! I came twice while reading it, which, for a guy, is pretty damn good!

OzJohn_69OzJohn_69over 10 years ago
Books and Covers

Just goes to show that you cant judge a book by its covers....better to take the covers off....loved it.

mnbreastluvermnbreastluverabout 10 years ago
A nice sexy story!

I thought that it was hot as hell, when she told him could stay and watch. It would be very erotic to watch a woman you just met touch herself. It also was a nice touch, adding about why she didn't want the candles lit.

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