All Comments on 'A Halloween Tale'

I seen your story on wattpad and there was a part 3 but my question is, is there more to your story?

Very good beginning! About to read chapter 2

Whip lash from lust of lies,to love of your enemy.

When is the next part do out! I have been with a white man for 9 years and wow that was really hot we both enjoyed this story together!

Awesome. I usually only check out male writers but every once in awhile a truely wonderful female writer comes along and I pay my complements. Great job.

It was sexy and funny and nice to see a sista take some control. I'm with the other posters- sequel please!

Ella can't leave Will or herself hanging like that. Please, please write a sequel.

Yash

I have to agree with the other posters, this needs a sequel, I want to know what happens to them.

Please, please, please. Excellent story.

OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO INCREDIBLY HOT I AM CREAMY

PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS I NEED TO KNOW IF SHE CAN GET PAST THIS AND THEY HAVE A GOOD SEXUAL RELATIONSHIP

I would love to read the next chapter!

That was fantastic, but then I again, I have come to expect that in your stories. I felt kind of bad for Will in the end. I hope you continue this story. Could it be that Will isn't as bad as he seems to be or that Karen isn't as much of a friend she seems to be. Hope to see more of Ella and Will's story. Great Job.

I like women who are willing to play the game the way a man does. Awesome story!

aw, hell! You can't stop there! Have mercy! I want them together or make it a series with her adventures and at the end her with will. Anyway, the story can't end here. Well written, truly enjoyed! Thanks!

The ending's just so cold hearted, so calculated to hurt, yet there's the prospect of such a great relationship here. His earlier callous words shouldn't stand in the way of a potentially loving relationship.

At least that's this reader's opinion.

Kydreamer

I loved it! You can't stop there... I have to know what happens!!!

I loved the build up, you can't stop there. What happens next?