All Comments on 'A Hot Summer's Night'

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lawleylawleyover 19 years ago
disappointed

took too long to get to the point.

too much 'she' and 'the girl'......I would have liked it to have been more natural and for names to be used from early in the story.

candymamacandymamaalmost 13 years ago
smiles

this story s good i liked it

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