by aussie_101
This is a very delicate and sensual experience. I think the writing was imaginatively conceived and expertly executed. I orgasmed at the same time as the principals of the story, the best compliment I can give
Sublimely written, lovingly built crescendo. A welcome surprise indeed!
That was spectacular. Way more interesting than the rush to the finish that typifies many stories (and, for that matter, actual sex). I didn't know slow and tender could be so incredibly hot.
it was just like being involved. Beautiful writing, the words trickling over the heightened senses and stimulating perfectly. Good to read someone who appreciates the female form so much. The measurement really didn't need to be mentioned - it nearly threw me off. The passion is important and the mutual respect. I did rather like it. Thank you.
After reading this, plus An Innocent Conversation, I am impressed. You have a lovely gift for conveying the thrill of sexual discovery. Plus, you are funny. Well done.
This was well written, the storyline perfect, an out and out amazing story. I loved reading this! Now I have to find my husband and attack him.
Absolutely incredible!!!!
After experiencing a similar exquisite interlude, I attempted to describe it and failed miserably. You somehow included every single detailed element and sensation. I applaud your skill with words, and hope that it was experience as well as imagination that fueled this delightful tale.
So descriptive! Your graphic description was exquisite! PURE JOY! What a journey!