by DG Hear
Bugger I thought I was more of a man but you had tears streaming down my face ......twat! Great job 5*'s . Your not a twat really just a great storyteller thanks.
Even though I saw the ending coming, somehow it was raining on my desk at the conclusion.
Wonderful story, the ending where was sad was also a happily ever after ending. Gets my 5 stars ++ vote
.........with a predictable but honest ending. Well worthy of the 5* I gave it. I'm glad this person (didjahear?) is such a prolific writer.
5 stars. Well written. I know everyone could see the ending coming, but the journey was well worth the read.
What a great read...I saw the ending coming, but not like that, very heartwarming!! 5*
At 73 years old I am struggling to fill in the comment box. Tears are causing a blurred vision to type a comment. Yet another great story. Thank you.
I loved it I am making my way thru D G hears stories I like his style best wishes ( jaybee186)
Extremely touching. While the various options you listed on the last line of the story could have been interesting, I think you selected the best of all options. Thank you. 5 stars +++
BJ
I'm back trying to write a little bit. I've be reading a lot of my old stories, makes me feel good to know that many readers are repeat readers and am finding some new followers of my stories.
Thank You
DG Hear
Well done and well written. Great characters. The story is fantssftic. Ask you can tell I'm a fan. John
I see your name and know the time spent reading your story will be well worth it. This was a "5". Thanks for providing a little enjoyment to one of the older crowd(75yrs)!
Age Difference broke my heart, lovely story, as ever by this author, cried proper ugly tears over this.
Great story! I kind of figured where it was going to end with Ellen passing away! Sad but then happy ending!
BR Cajun Guy
O M G ! How you balanced and put together / created both chapters were nothing short of AMAZING !
I Thoroughly enjoyed this !
THANKS !
life isn't always as good as we'd like ,but making the most of what you have is living .
no matter who you are or what you are life goes on . we all have to accept that as part of being human and mortal .
Some write out fantasies and some write really good love stories, the kind that tug at one's heart and has you smiling like a fool. You writing falls into the latter. Amazing how this lovely story can touch a not so soft heart...!
Regarding your open letter to ask for alternate endings, as appropriate according to your readers BUT I don't see an alternate ending & certainly Nothing that would improve what you created.
I do have one suggestion, at the beginning of your second chapter, you might have included a, Note: tissues may be required.
THANKS !