Amy's Smile Ch. 08

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I shrugged. Mr. Congeniality he wasn't, but he had a point. I bought the ticket, then followed him as he escorted me to the waiting plane.

It was one of those small jobs Northwestern keeps for towns with no radar. A dozen seats at best. Ten of them were occupied and every one of those was inhabited by people who looked pissed as hell at me for making them wait. I slunk into one of the two unoccupied seats right across from the restroom and swore softly as that door opened and a six-year-old boy with jelly donut on his face and hands proceeded to crawl over me to take his place by the window.

"Hey Ma," he shouted to a woman all the way at the front where she no doubt tried to pretend she'd never seen the little shit before. "I threw up and now I feel lots better!"

Fuck it, maybe we'd just crash on takeoff, and the whole mess I called my life would be over. If I'd known how the next eight hours were going to play, I might have flown it into the ground myself.

*Author's note: My editor Scott told me that even though he wanted to strangle me when he got to the end of the chapter and still no Amy, he still liked it. Hope the rest of you will be as kind and I assure the next, and definitely last chapter, will finally get that girl back into the story. Jayne

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

To the recent commentors. According to all reports, the author has passed away.

Check out "Oldlockguy." He did an ending for this story.

LilkahunaLilkahunaabout 1 year ago

Can't believe you never finished this story...and it's only been 10 years

Bigguy731Bigguy731over 3 years ago
amy's smile: a conclusion by oldlockguy

Not by jfinn. Read intro to conclusion. He doesn't like unhappy ending. Only a few pages in so far so no spoiler alert.

Bigguy731Bigguy731over 3 years ago

The end really upset me but I think I see what happened. Amy was in love with Liam and told him several times (not in so many words "its only sex". When he was out of the picture, Amy moved in on Liam when the other girl dumped him.

Bigguy731Bigguy731over 3 years ago

Agreed. Why go this far when you can’t finish it?

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