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Just W.T.F. was that?

Very refreshing. Very loving and romantic and of course, hot and graphic in the end! Keep more coming!

love story of a woman who is a loving submissive to her husband whom she not only loves but worships. This is as it should be. This is one of the best chapters I have ever read on Lit. I have the feeling that the woman in the story, a least her mental state, is going to be destroyed and would seriously hope not. It is possible to write very good erotica in which the wife is actually a loyal, loving, sexually active wife. My best on this first chapter. I look in sorrow at those that are to immature or to inexperienced to realize what they are reading. My wife lovves me this way, she is the sexiest woman I have ever seen or imagined. And we have been in swinging always together and her always protected by me if needed.

I love the way you include loads of precum moments into your stories, what about letting it land from your cock onto her clit only to then watch it roll in between those soft petals? Seeing the rope connect your glans with her cunt then seeing it get squeezed out to cover your glans as it gently eases in? Huh? What that?

Jon loves Angel, glad he didn't share with William. Yet.