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- Bathing With Maria
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by Wes99
- 25 Comments
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoRe the story, LOVE it ❤ = ☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0 = 100%)!
Re Maria's pic on p. 2: ❤ = ☆☆☆☆☆+ (5.25/5=105%, above expectations)!
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoI totally agree with anon 08/18/09:
this is a lovely, tender & erotic story which avoids so many cliches.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoI shall quote an earlier comment: A picture is worth a thousand words; a picture of a woman's naked ass: PRICELESS!
This is a VERY POPULAR STORY: 866,554 views so far (impressive!)
CharlyDover 7 years agoA touching story... so much like mine, except, I have yet to be led into the forest. 66 years I have waited...
Anonymousover 8 years ago:)
Anonymousover 9 years agoYou got that one right!
The story is excellent (*****). The ass is even better (can we give 6*?).
Maria is a keeper.
Wess99, thank u!
Anonymousabout 10 years agoGood, real good, story. If you want to call it illustrated you are missing the mark. Two photos and only one of which has anything to do with the story. The one of her in the tub is relevant. The one of her from the back getting into bed is not part of telling the story. Illustrations and pictures only serve a story insofar as they help move the story along or to make an impact upon the reader with an image of a scene from the text. Random photographs do not do that. Illustrate your stories, yes, but give your reader more than two black and white images and make them relevant. Make them 'speak' to your readers.
NellaBarely2over 11 years agoWes99 has crafted this script with almost photogenic verbal images that the pictures could be, in some venues, Distracting. This is my reading preference; such a well described series of ever-growing erotic situations that impart the power to become much more with each readers own imagination, from his or her personal life experiences, Or Dream sequences. I'm a believer in the strength of True Romance between lovers, that this story would be destroyed with the typical smut too many beginning "erotic writers" assume they are "required to Fill pages" to become noticed. You set the standard for meaningful, emotionally charged, romantic erotica ... As well as a standard for mutual respect, understanding and patience. Well done.
fireguy365over 11 years agoA true love story that I enjoyed very much. The sex wasn't the down and dirty like a lot of stories here, it was a fulfillment to a human need. The story flowed along without the typical super stud mounts and concurs the lady. It's easy to tell that the two are very much in love and care for each others feelings. Keep up the good work.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoA most tender and loving story, I can empathise completely with this tale. You succeeded in five years where I failed in forty eight.
The pictures are superfluous (and they don't match your description).
Anonymousover 14 years agoA lovely, tender and erotic story that avoids so many cliches. Thank you
Jenny6969over 16 years agoThis is one of the sweetest stories I've read in a LONG time. Thank you so much!.
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoThank you for leaving something for the imagination. It's nice to read an eroctic story that doesn't have a blow by blow a count of every stroke but takes you to the very core of sexual feelings. Very well writen and loving thought out 5 stars from me.
steffenabout 17 years agoThis was one of the very best stories I've ever read on this site. You cast a wonderfully insightful light on the inner life of your couple. How nice to read about caring, tenderness and lovemaking. I can't wait to read more.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoYour story of sexual awakening was an excellent tender story of 2 lovers not 2 copulators. Marriage and sex with the same woman is full of deepening love, sexual pleasures and sometimes great surprises.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoExcellent story and lovely photos. You have captured the mood and excitment of being with a woman in an adventurous and needy frame of mind. Thank you
cybrfunalmost 18 years agoThat other commenter is an idiot...Maria is what a REAL woman looks like! Gorgeous, sexy, full...you are one lucky man! Let's have more from you...great stuff! And more pics to go with them...you've got a growing fanbase!
don87654almost 18 years agoAnybody can tell a story about their trusted mate and include a couple of pics from Playboy or Penthouse. Needs some concentration on erotic behavior.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoOf course you must ignore dar clayton, what a pathetic comment he left! Thanks the most! Beatiful. Steve
mystical_dreamz_1963almost 18 years agoI just wanted to say that this is the best story that i have read by far and i hope there are many more to come.It got me wet!!!!!!!!!!
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