All Comments on 'Betty's Self Discovery Ch. 02'

This story definetly needs more chapters. I definetly like the way you describe the seductions. Would like to see more seductions of straight women. Keep up the great work.

Not much to add to ANONYMOUS (USA)just keep Betty working on seducing straight women.It make us so wet.

THANK YOU.

You have to know that you're one of the premiere writers on this site. Every story has such great quality - erotic but at the same time gentle. This story is no exception. I hope we see more of Lisa and Betty - it'd be great if the two discovered they had fallen in love. Keep up the great work! I love you!

Excellent writing! The stories are so vivid and reassuring. Makes me want to pursue my own fantasies.

Pelios....Can you pass me the number of this girl? I think I like her and want her to "seduce" me!

Winks.

Love your stories....

Celly

It is a great and sensually steamy story but I don't want to read threesomes in that story. Threesomes with guy and 2 women turned me off completely because I am lesbian.

As always, very erotic and sexy. Love everyone of your stories and can hardly wait for your next one.

You wrie terrific stories. Please continue with the adventures of Betty.

Having started to post my own stories... just as I think I am approaching an acceptable standard, I come across writing like yours and realise how much I have to learn. Sheer class!

The erotic writing of this is fantastic and very exotic using exactly the right words to get the sexual effect you were going for...looking forward to part 3!!!

Yet another great story. Attention to detail is there but never over worked. You could feel the tense atmosphere as Betty seduced away.

Miranda

That must be one of the very best lesbian stories I have ever read. The wantoness of your heroine is marvelous to behold. Keep writing!

I am really enjoying your stories, I think that the way you work the characters is very sensual, my only complaint (if you can call it that) is it seems toward the end of the stories I have read, they become rushed to finish, other than that keep up the great work

Enjoyed what is a great story,quite erotic

Got to admit if the first one was written by a man then he did a whole lot better with chapter two, sorry but chapter one had male fantasy written all over it

I love the way it just gets hotter as you continue! So exciting....

A few things in it seemed out of kilter and had 'male perspective' written all over them, though not as much as in the first part. Loved the panty swap, though my experience is how bloody uncomfortable they are when wet! Grammatically, the last sentence left me confused, i.e. 'I just can't wait for what tonight would unfold!' Is it meant to be 'couldn't' not can't or 'would' is meant to be will?