Blackhawk Hall Ch. 06

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I hope you've enjoyed this story. I know it was a kick to write, and I absolutely love Arilee. She started as nothing more than a pair of eyes to introduce Christi and Mindblind. The next thing I knew, she was the center of the story.

Big thanks to Ed for the challenge words, and Roust for his skilled eye on the new edit you just finished reading.

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Linnea10Linnea10about 13 years ago
Oh my!

I haven't really felt the need to experiment with other girls but reading this has me so hot for another woman!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
NICE

'"Be careful of those, I'd like to keep them working,"'

*wince* *laugh*

TalemasterTalemasterover 13 years ago
excellent writing

I very much enjoyed the story. Good plot and well executed. One thing that distinguishes it from the rest is that it is well edited. Grammar and spelling is flawless, a rare treat in this genre.

Talemaster

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
beautiful

I never would've thought that I would cry at the end of a erotic story. Well done and keep on writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
fantastic

more please! and THANK YOU!

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