by logophile
Logo that was beautiful.. Such a bittersweet story. Loved it. Thank you. but please take your pic off your bio.
unveils many emotions throughout. Very arousing and touching at the same time.
This is the first that I have read of yours and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Would that it could really happen... but what if it can...? ~Minx
That was very well written, it really felt as if it were something you had experienced. You conveyed the emotions so well, romantic and very erotic.
logophile, I am an immediate fan, after this one! What a combination of sensuality and pathos! I, too, almost cried, and we men don't DO THAT, especially with a hard-on! Keep up the good work...I'll continue reading!
How could I have missed this the first time? You are astonishingly gifted! Sack, sobbing quietly
awwwww That was wonderful!
Beautifully written and I agree with the comment below - Not a word wasted!
I am, it seems, a touchy feely sort today, not only was your story arousing it brought a tear to my eye.
Well Done!
Catie/emerald
You've managed to paint another story that is so vivid and clear that its almost like being there!
Its hot, erotic, passionate and so much more. The storyline is cool too. I hope she gets a yearly visit even if its only in her mind.
-lv
What a lovely piece of writing!! I was very moved. a wonderful Samhain experience
First-rate job, Logophile. A well written heart-tugger. If this was in Romance or Erotic Couplings it would pull a very high score. Keep up the good work.
Rumple
What an amazing story! It's not very often I get teary reading erotica!
I enjoyed reading your story as it was lovingly written. And just that necessary touch of realism.
Good luck.
Logophile strikes again. A true knack for creating visual images through writing. My wife was caught between tears and arousal! Great Story!!! brianandbrooke@sls