by timberwulff
Had me racing to wikipedia a few times (Bast, 69, and catnip). Once I knew about the catnip I suspected the ending. my only beef is that the sexual play was rather rushed (i.e., animal style is not my thing).
For a first time effort I enjoyed it. The sex could have been a little steamier. More chapters would be great.
it takes alot of courage to write a story on here. it was nice and compleat for your first one. im impressed . nice job..-LJ
I figured it'd be a furry story, which is why I came to the nonhuman section in the first place; I really liked it. Obviously, it's been a while since you've written anything, but I really think you should continue writing.
Good and solid for a first outing. I have a thing for Bast/Bastet myself, and doing a story centered around this particular goddess has always been on my to do list. I like the way it is going so far. Just enough to get the reader hooked in. Not only should you write more, but I think it would be a crime if you did not write more.
-Master Vyle
that was so fucking hot to read i love when its half human half amuile people so hot
But can it be longer, and of course answer the questions left hanginf