by scouries
Even though a mostly predictable plot line, still a very enjoyable read with many minor points to hold the interest. Thank you.
We who have daughters have had feelings that happen but never dare try. This story is as close to what we all have felt at times. Thanks for making me feel not alone.
I REALLY liked how easy the story flowed and how pleasant it was to not have to pause when a grammatical error, or a misspelled or misplaced word, would necessitate the need for me to pause, go back, see what the mistake was, viz. what was intended, then find my place again in the paragraph and have the story start to flow again. Thus it was a GREAT JOY to just read. Smooth interaction of the main charaters.
This is a motivating, arousing, fantasy. With a happy ending that I shared prematurely. I don't normally read entries this long, but the beginning solidified my error in finding it. I even wondered about how I would like to be the child.
Great theme and story line. It would have been great with more character and plot development. I did not like the racist comments in her dream. They weren't necessary and hurt my rating. Otherwise a fun read.
Man , I loved how he made love to his daughter the first time, it was so hot as I wa reading to my girlfriend, who was in love with her Oren father, and wax too afraid to approach her daddy, but wants to fantasize me being her father as we fuck, and she cums so hard on my cock, pretending I am . He is gone now, dying before she got to fuck her father,which is a total loss , because he got to finger her pussy when she was a little girl as he bathed her and there was no mother in the household. What a loss!!
Yes, its an amazing story! My heart raced as I read the fine details sometimes more than once before moving ahead to the next sexy and erotic moment. Thank you for placing on paper what some of us would never
experience with our own daughter. Yes, Bravo!
The patience that your husband and you went thorough was amazing for those four mouths. I wish you the best in your future year in life. I hope your husband and you do continue to have sexual love to death do you part. I have read wonderful long life with sexual love. My parents did for 63 years.
Both my daughter and I have read this story 20 times. At first we thought it was about us but how could it be. We live in a different part of the country and have one girl and two boys. But the love they show is no different than what Ashley and I share. Bravo and well done. To you that can not relate, we are sorry but to those that can, again, bravo. Love Ashley and dad.
Well i will tell you the nay Sayers here are not really seeing the love in this story .
They have not learned how love really works. It is a shame because they miss
the true depth of this story and the love the writer is portraying here. People
need to open their minds and they will see.
I for one LOVED the way it all panned out . Beautiful loving story.
Thank You
I believe the racist banter included is kind a tool handled by the daughter, in her seducing task. I don't think it shows the author's inclination.
Second time to read this story and still would give it a 5. Personally I don't know how the father held out so long I know I wouldn't have.
Racist much? OK, a nightmare but just the same...
I stopped reading at that point...
I have read this story over and over. It is the BEST story that I have ever read. I love the fact that Steffi and her dad ended up getting married. I am going to find a way to revote but I know that isn't possible. So I will give you 100 stars for a story well written. I look forward to finding some of your other stories. However I think that they will pale in comparison to this story.
Such an amazing story. Wow if thisnisntrue this is every daddy and daughters dream.
I say again – scouries you’re a damn fine writer who has the ability to take a Taboo subject and you spin such a good yarn that we come to accept it! Full Marks – 5-Stars! I’ve never like Incest and would not accept it – it's for me like 'Black Cuckolding" a but too much exageration too much hyperbole for reality. Here you made is almost acceptable and that takes some great writing. Thanks for sharing!
Wow one wonderful story. I love daddy/daughter stories. I myself had a real good relationship with 2 of my girls.I would love to hear about daddy making love to one of your daughters or all of them. Very well written, no mistakes i could see. i vote a five.
The only issue I had was the sparce moments of egdy intimacy, but far too much padding. Thankfully not heavy redundant padding.
I enjoyed the composition well enough to give it 4 stars.
As for those readers being ass hurt. It's a fictional story. The author has the right to compose it as they wish. The have the right to not like it. But your feelings are irrelevant.
Seriously people. You’re reading a procreating incest story and you’re offended by another situational aspect of the plot?!
There was so much buildup to them having sex and then we got very little of the sex.
I agree that the 3 rapists should have not been named as Arabs - 3 'bad men' would have told the story just as well. Setting that aside, I liked the rest. I am curious about how these parents will handle the inevitable when their 3 young daughters reach adulthood?
The part about the “big and dirty” arab men really turned me off and to be honest also pissed me off a little. Some of the most important people in my life are men, and guessed it, they’re arab. They’re the nicest and that part ruined it for me. Like i legit couldn’t read more.
God I loved it iv been sleeping with my dad for about 4 years now I wish it happened before I was 19 such a good story I don’t understand how anyone could think it’s wrong a girl was born to love her daddy
Looks like you hit a neve with the dream I guess alot of people of that faith like incest
Excellent story in my view with good character development and enough erotics. I enjoyed it very much.
5*
BJ
Dialogue is stupid. And by the way, medical schools don’t have freshman classes.
Will not read any more comments you people are really sick. ENJOY THE STORY FOR GODS SAKE.
Pretty decent story, but the racist "nightmare" and xenophobia in the beginning were totally unnecessary, and detracted from the story. For an author who is supposedly so experienced and prolific, it is very amateurish and juvenile. I hope it isn't something endemic to your writing. If it is, I doubt I will read much more .
I truly loved this. Especially the part where they shared each others juices. Too many are afraid to write about men who don't mind tasting or sharing cum.
I have read almost every story you have written. I like your wring style, to the point and compact, not betting around the bush, not like other writers who dwell to much in description!!!
i cant with the racism in the 1st chapter this female protag is so cringey i,,
I stopped reading when I realized that the writer really doesn't like Arabs.
I think the story was sensational. I became very excited and close to the two characters in the story. Remember it is all a fantasy?????
It's funny seeing all the comments on a story that is 16 years old complaining about racism. Check the dates on the story and what the news was during that time period people!
I stopped reading because of the racism and the shaming of uncircumcised men
Unlike the liberals, I liked the smelly arab racism, that is exactly what they do to women in their countries, Europe and Scandinavia, fits her nightmares well !
I love it it,s just a sweet love story between two adults.nothing is wrong sex is primal and raw energy so i love the connection of them .keep writing plz i love this kind of story .and yes they got married too which is important.wating for more story .
I have not seen a father and doughter i saw a man and women who just love raw and natural fullfill their desire perfect.
3rdchnc
Liked the story, except for the racist rape in the beginning.
Would have been better if she was and her friends were leaving a club, were being attacked, and were saved by her daddy, who was there to pick them up.
The racism killed it for me. I've had nightmares of being raped and lives through rape, I didn't obsesse over the guy's race and ethnicity. Totally unrealistic and unrelatable for me. Ruined my lady boner to the point that I can't power through it. Thanks for killing the mood. Please put racist content warning.
It was a little to slow for me, For a sexual read it was long laid out. I know most readers want to get right to it, I don't mind a good read. some times there was a few more words than needed be but over all i got an erection.
Got to love the way the "anonymous people" love spewing "racist". It's the girls nightmare you daft muppets. Nightmares do not tend to be rational and there are literally thousands of girls out there that have been gang raped, including many by "Arabs". Nightmares tend to be what the mind thinks is the worst. If you cannot wrap your head around that aspect, then I would suggest you might want to learn more about what people fear, how nightmares work and why people fear that which is different.
I thought personally the need to go into so much detail around the nightmare was unnecessary, however that is the author's choice, if you don't like it, don't read it.
This is a nice story. I like that you didn't end it with the trip to Paris, UT talked about your marriage, and children.
Beautiful, if not for the racist part, unnesisary for a "nightmare" to be detailed at all, let alone spacific in its racism. I realize the time period this was written in highlighted certain social issues but there still wasn't a need for it. A real dr would have latched onto her obvious trauma and tried to find out what had happened to his daughter. The lack of concern is ... Concerning. Otherwise, a well written love story 5* -1* for the blatant faux pas.
I can see this really happening. If people don’t think dads sees their daughters like that are nuts. Not all can do it but they do dream about it.
Would get at least 4* for the writing, which flows well and with plenty of my favourite ;
But the racist stuff is vile and pathetic, and although it's in the mouth of the character, not the writer, it's not challenged or presented as a bad side of their personality. So no. It's not getting a 5 or even a 4
What is up with the white supremacy sh*t? I'm not even an Arab, but what's with the idolization of whiteness and blonde or how others are jealous? Totally can't continue.
the Arab thing was the biggest turn off ever. check your blatant racism, loser.
I dearly loved it. 5 is not good enough for this hot yummy story. I give it a 10.
is this what you guys thinks of arabs ??
that was the racist shit I've ever heard!!
the thing about arab men. fuck you. that was so racist and unnecessary. ruined the whole story.