by PassionStJohn
Well wriiten. I do like occasional male domination stories but this is a little extreme. I mean if you want love it cannot ever be one sided. And the falling in love part was not believable at all.kinda forced. Like as if you had to make the girl fall in love so she felt an ache inside her? Seriously?
P.S - The main guy is kind only with words.
And we all know that actions speaks louder than words.
I loved it's! Hope there is more to their story!?! Keep writing, I can't wait to read more of your work.
I personally enjoyed the story. What other readers are failing to grasp in the story, is that she is not just a human woman who he would have used and tortured. She's a dragon as well. By nature dragon's are supposed to be cruel and vicious. He wanted to tame her so to speak, so she could be his mate. He awakened the beast inside of her, of course she would fall in love with him! He's the only one she met, that could handle her. She was never meant to be with a human man.
I'm usually not really into nonhuman stories. But this one was so well done, and with such appealing and absorbing characters. Really enjoyed it and would like to have it continue a bit as their relationship matures. And, then find the mayor.
Classic case. Woman falls in love with kidnapper after originally fighting them. Thank you, you wrote a story that fits my fantasies perfectly.
I truly enjoy this and see myself as Bran when it comes to relationships I wish my little Moon (my mate) would realize this
I love the way you blended fantasy and sex.
I'm looking forward to more of your stories.
This story is very well written.
Bran is so, so sexy. As for Marged, well, while turning into a very sensual submissive, she remains a woman, not a doormat. A great story with even better characters!
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
Please write more. My pussy aches for more of Bran.
This story is disturbing to say the least. And the comments even more. I cannot understand how some can find it romantic.
I think at best it's a good horror story with a ''meh'' ending. It would have made more sense if he killed her or if she killed herself. Cause the Stockholm syndrome ''happy'' ending is just what make it trully horrible and uncofortable. When you write about rape commit to it, tell all the gruesome details and how it can break someone, but just ''she missed him to much after a week and now she is deeply in love with no conflicting feelings at all'' , is the easy and lazy route.
We know nothing about Bran apart from the fact that he is a cruel assh*le, so he is boring. And Marged could be really interesting but he brainwash any bit of personnality she can have, so we just pity her.
Overall i did not enjoy this story , even if i usually like rape, cause here it's not really treated as such and so it loose any interest, that's sad because the premise is nice.
I think their story could be explored further into a second chapter. I also think their relationship is fine even though there is manipulation. This is fiction and a book of fantasy so I don’t think there is any true harm done.
Really hope there is a second part. This was a good read. Really enjoyed what he was able to do.
Let me guess: writer is a man. This may be ur fantasy n so be it. But you have much to learn about women. We want to be loved, respected, n yes have fun. But your character has no truth by losing her true self. Sorry, just not believable.
I regret finishing it. Not because I liked it but because she lost everything that made her character.