Drifting

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Alex lapped the juices on either side of the clit, her fingers back inside and moving slowly in and out. She could feel Beth's clit swelling as she sucked it softly, a hard little button between her soft lips, her fingers continually sliding in and out, in and out. Then her fingers were all the way out and her tongue moved down to the opening. Beth whimpered and humped upward as if to grab Alex's tongue with her cunt. Alex drank her, sucking the juices between her lips, slurping, not caring about the noise she made, her face wet, breathing on the wet cunt, the tip of her tongue flapping against it. Again. Again. Her tongue striking Beth's clit more firmly as Beth squirmed and pushed upward again. Slapping the clit now, slapping it with her tongue, Beth bucking up and down and up again.

With her fingers, Alex pulled at the mound above the clit to get the flesh more exposed. Her tongue rapidly swiped from side to side, and suddenly Beth jerked and started coming, her cunt contracting on Alex's fingers, gripping them, Beth crying out as Alex's lips captured Beth's clit and held it prisoner. Under lock and key. She kept her face pressed against Beth's cunt as Beth continued coming.

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"Let me do you."

"No."

"Oh god."

"What?"

"I hope you're not a damn stone butch. I hate stone butches."

"I'm not that way. I'm too strung out. I came before."

"You did?"

"I came while I was eating you. That never happens to me."

"I'm flattered."

"Don't run away."

"Oh, don't worry about that. I'm not going anywhere."

"Good."

"You're different."

"Different than what? Other women?"

"My last, anyway."

"The one you're always thinking about?"

"Yes. But I'm not thinking about her now. I'm thinking about you."

"I need someone in my life."

Beth sighed, pressing her face into Alex's armpit. "Okay."

"Okay?"

"Okay."

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PixiehoffPixiehoffalmost 5 years ago
First rate

Marco had to remain a sphinx without a riddle. Well written and well observed.

Able_semenAble_semenalmost 5 years ago
Breathtaking, an erotic epic

Perhaps the best story in this genre I have read on Lit - wonderful mingling of characters and their stories, excellent, sparing choice of language, the authenticity of experience dripping (a suitable word) from each page. I had to read it in several chunks as I was overtaken by the need and desire to masturbate.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Good story but too many characters to keep track of.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Could have been better

I much prefer long stories and this tale certainly delivered on that front. Moreover, it was well written throughout. But it was a little too heavy on the sexual permutations and a bit too light on plot. Furthermore, despite various characters declaring love for each other, there was no real sense of love at all, just sex for the sake of it. And finally, none of the characters were really likeable and if at least some of the characters in a story are not likeable, then there's little point to it. The reader just doesn't care about them. I've given five stars for the writing quality but frankly I didn't care for any of the characters---just about all of them deserved to wallow in their misery.

DumpingtonDumpingtonover 9 years ago
Excellent writing style!

I especially enjoyed how, right at the very beginning, Marlo orders the pretty girl modelling for her out of her clothes before then taking the girl doggy-style with her strap-on! That's always just so incredibly hot!

BahamaBahamaover 11 years ago
Wow

I loved the story ,it made me sad and happy. Please write more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Awesome story!

I really liked this story. I love the depth of character development and the weaving of all the story lines. My biggest disappointment was that I wanted to know more about Marlo. Why was she that cold and afraid of disappointment and commitment? I can surmise a little, but I would have liked more depth about her. But like I said, awesome, awesome story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
thank goodness.

first, to the people commenting on here that claim you need men if you like strap-ons, well. you don't know what you're talking about. I personally don't prefer them, but some people like strap-ons and exclusively like women.. butches, AGs, studs, stone butch.. you can't judge unless you're that person.. so stop trying to invalidate people.

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second, I loved this story. while I definitely had a few issues, they're not the point right now. I would've liked to see this as a series, but in a way it was. but I like that you had butches and femmes and in between; twosomes & threesomes & foursomes, oh my!; that beth sought happiness after marlo; rita finding someone who wasn't cheating on her.. the list goes on.

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third, unfortunately, I didn't like the ending. I mean, it was good, but it felt abrupt after all of the build up..

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in the end, this is closer to what I'd like to see the L Word ACTUALLY being.

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kudos.

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PLUS. I live in the hudson valley/ulster county.. so it was cool to hear of places which I'm familiar with. I dug that. hehe. :)

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-a

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
thank goodness.

first, to the people commenting on here that claim you need men if you like strap-ons, well. you don't know what you're talking about. I personally don't prefer them, but some people like strap-ons and exclusively like women.. butches, AGs, studs, stone butch.. you can't judge unless you're that person.. so stop trying to invalidate people.

<br>

<br>

second, I loved this story. while I definitely had a few issues, they're not the point right now. I would've liked to see this as a series, but in a way it was. but I like that you had butches and femmes and in between; twosomes & threesomes & foursomes, oh my!; that beth sought happiness after marlo; rita finding someone who wasn't cheating on her.. the list goes on.

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third, unfortunately, I didn't like the ending. I mean, it was good, but it felt abrupt after all of the build up..

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in the end, this is closer to what I'd like to see the L Word ACTUALLY being.

<br>

<br>

kudos.

<br>

<br>

PLUS. I live in the hudson valley/ulster county.. so it was cool to hear of places which I'm familiar with. I dug that. hehe. :)

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-a

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Very well written but...

Wonderful story but you so-called lesbians are borderline comedic with your desperate attempts to make all these asexual women, "strong." Especially with all the fake dicks flying around the.

If you're really a strong woman you'd do what you want with a strong man. That's what full, healthy strong women do. Most of you all are just scared of being a woman. Let that estrogen flow girls. Stop being so scared of yourself and Life overall.

Pure fantasy-land but that's what literotica is, isn't it??

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