by Rumple Foreskin
I loved the voyeur and subtle d/s aspects of this. It was a little hard to follow in the long paragraphs when the dialogue switched characters, but it also gave a feeling of urgency, like a pent-up breath that was finally released at the end, which was stylistically interesting. Great entry, Rump, I enjoyed it!
see any formatting problems..*fans face* nope, none at all. Fantastic story as always Rumple. You sure know how to write them...
Consider yourself five bombed...
Great job, Rumple! You've packed a lot into just one page! It was a very naughty and entertaining read, and I wish you luck in the contest.
...all of these Holiday Stories, gifts, angels, cab rides, ghosts... some of them don't even have SEX!
How am I going to be able to ride in a cab without being disappointed...?
Thanks Rumple for pointing me this way--and to the story.
story but I don't think it belonged in romance. Maybe in E/V. I'm also not sure why he would want both of the keys.