All Comments on 'Fire Ch. 05'

This is a great story line and so excellently written. Am enjoying it very much.

Yep the previous comment summed it up, if this story doesn't heat you up, you're dead.

This is the kind of heat I need right now on a cold dark winter night! One of the best Literotica!!!! If it's not listed as one of the best stories here, I'll be very put out.

I don't need to say any more than that.. Oh my god..

i still love these stories so much!!

that was amazingly hot and wow

Oh wow I feel weak. I forgot to breathe during that chapter. That was the hottest most sensual love scene I have ever read.

You are absolutely amazing..This series is well on it's way to becoming my absolute favourite..Please don't keep your fans waiting too long for the next chapter =D

Speechless. Keep it up.

great job!

the story line is just getting better and better! I can't wait to see where this ends up! Please don't stop writing!

My hubby & I have both followed this story from day 1 and it just keeps getting better!!! Thank you!

Can't wait for the next one.

That was hot!! Love these characters and their relationship. This story just keeps getting better and better!

Hot! Hot! HOT!!! I can't wait for the next one. I like her character so much better in this last chapter. And I have always adored his! The plot is great and the interactions between the main characters are sizzling. Very well written. Keep it up and we'll be seeing you in Borders, Amazon... whatever!

I'm so enjoying this story, it's well written, edited, and keeps me looking for more. Great characters!Great sex!

Come on baby, light my fire!

Nice job!

The chapter was that hot! :)