All Comments on 'Flesh: Prologue'

simply no words to describe it .out of world stuff.

The best story I've read on literotica, ever! And I've been reading for at least three years.

I am in awe of your skills as an author... this was an incredible story.

The story was a little long but I loved it.

I've read all your stories on Literotica in the past, and they've all been excellent. This one was even better. Please keep writing. I really, really enjoy your stories.

A superior story because it is that, a story. You've given it a sense of reality unlike almost any other I have ever read in the adult literature. It is clear that you have an anthropologic background. I am reminded of the unwritten travels of Richard Evans Shultheis as alluded to in the book "One River" by Wade Davis. Schultheis spent many years as an ethnobotanist in the upper Amazon, learning how the indiginous populations used the plants that surrounded them. Richard died this past year, but the stories about him continue on. Again, a most compelling tale. Write on!

I almost can't believe it... your stories just seem to get better and better, this one being the best yet. Erotic fiction with a plot can be rare... glad to have found one of the better ones. Thumbs up from me!

Almost a surprise ending! I really like the way you transformed the character of Dr. Monroe into a native sex goddess! Perhaps this quality laid dormant in her all along, as it does in many of us in one form or another.

I was "glued" to this tale -- & that IS saying something, as it's THE longest I've yet encountered on Literotica!!

KUDOS on your MASTERFUL work!!

This is the best story I have read on this web site. Kudos my friend.

simply the best..*****

Never have I read a humiliation story as sweet as this. Loved it

This is hands down my all time favorite Literotica story. It's incredible that you could build so much sexual tension for eight pages and keep me totally enthralled, despite a lack of "actual" sex. My most fervent hope is to (someday) write a story half this good.

I haven't been in Literotica for ages, and when I come back I find another wonderful story by Wonderstorm.

Thank you for writing and posting this. Again I am knocked out by your skills.

Thanks

Sara

I'm speechless. I thought you were going to play this jaguar off as something that had just happened without an explanation, but the ending was absolutely magical. Definitely the best I have read on literotica.

I want to get fucked by that dildo!