How to Write for Literotica

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We've all done it, as we read a story on world famous Literotica we think, 'I can do better than that.' Well why not, maybe you can write a better story but you'll never find out unless you try. You should have a word processing program such as Word, or Works, etc. This helps a lot as it has a built in spell check and will even help to correct English mistakes.

I would think the easiest way to start is to take the story you just said you could write better, now copy and paste into your word processing program. Go through and make some changes to where the tale fits your thoughts on how it should be told. Now read the original and then your version, how'd you like it, was it really better, or just different? OK let's say you thought it came out better, well that's good except now you have plagiarized some hard working artist's story, and that's a sin my friend.

Next let's try a story from your imagination, don't tell me you can't because we all have fantasies we just need to turn them into stories. How do you do that, all it takes is practice. Start by writing something small, not a story, but a scene. Get a picture in your mind now describe that picture as clear as you can. Now read your scene, does it accurately display your mental picture in words? If not make some changes now reread, don't be discouraged if it doesn't work, this is not as easy as it looks and it will take some practice.

If you can't find the words to describe the picture in your mind, then try to fit the picture to your words. If this new mental image is not as interesting as your original, then go back to your words and try to find what missing. Let's say your mental picture is of a woman, that's always a good image to have in your mind. In your mind, she is sexy with large breasts and long flowing hair with sensuous lips. Once you have put this down it describes a woman but still leaves out details of your woman. We now know her breasts are large but how about her nipples, are they erect and large or small but protruding nubs. How about her eyes, are they large and innocent or dark and mysterious. As this is just a scene, you should go into more detail than you might in a story. First, picture her in your mind and describe her in as much detail as you can.

If you're ready, let's try a sex scene, as you can imagine the sex scene is the most important part of a sex story. For your first one you should keep it simple and use a scenario that's familiar with you. The biggest rookie mistake we all make is too many Ahhhs and Ohhhs etc. This might be the way it sounds in your bedroom but it doesn't translate too well on paper. If you feel you need something like this, just describe it as moans and let it go at that. You will soon find out that sex is hard to do well on paper, for basically sex is just 'it goes in and it goes out' and there is only so many ways you can say it. You need to portray excitement for both parties and you do that by the look on their faces or their shortness of breath and the heat of their bodies.

Orgasms need to show satisfaction, again without the two letter guttural sounds we tend to make while climaxing. Just as a public service note here, unless it goes against the story subject we all should practice safe written sex. It is just this world is now full of dangerous STDs and if you can have your characters practice safe sex it will help reinforce people to have safe sex out there in the real world. I know I'm as bad as anybody and I love a good messy cum scene in my stories but I try to sacrifice my art for the sake of the common good.

I know the secret of good writing is practice and as my many critics will tell you, I am not a good writer. Yet I know I have improved and I feel I have evolved into a person who writes stories that I enjoy and if someone else finds pleasure in something I write it's just that much better. I found early on that you couldn't please everybody, so write for yourself, and let the critic's fall where they may.

Literotica has a very talented volunteer editorial section full of volunteer readers who will edit your story free, the one hang up being that most are so busy they take a long time to get back to you. So good luck with your story and if I have encouraged or helped you in any way, send me a note when you story is accepted, I'd love to read it.

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ETobserverETobserverover 2 years ago

good tips BUT my story was REJECTED by some rookie editor talking about not enough punctuation - WTF?

AngusStewartAngusStewartover 5 years ago
New here and appreciate the tips

Thanks for posting this article. I appreciate the tips and will keep them in mind as I begin the journey.

Jonathanmartin322Jonathanmartin322almost 7 years ago

Going to take your advice and give it a try.

xusarxusarover 7 years ago
real amature true stories

Why don't you have a section for true stories? I would like to think that their are a lot of people with a real experience story to tell. We do and would likecto see a section of nothing but true stories.

sexlover_94sexlover_94over 10 years ago
helped a lot

Thanks. It helped a lot. i have written a couple of stories so far, but they didn't go so well. I think this will help me make it better.

thanks again.

susurrussusurrusover 13 years ago
I find it interesting

that - as usual - the great majority of the negative feedback on this article was written by the ever prolific, ever opinionated Anonymous.

Whatever your opinion on any part of the author's other output, the infomration here is sound. I've read many an article over the years on the technical aspects of creative writing, and they all read pretty much the same as the information contained here.

estragonestragonover 13 years ago
Elementary

but useful to encourage a beginner.

reneemyreneereneemyreneeabout 14 years ago
!WoW!

I gleaned some useful information from this article. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I honestly think some of you commenters miss the point...

Yes, it's great when other people like what you write. But there's so much fun to be had from having a go at writing a story yourself, regardless of how it turns out - and I think that's what the author's trying to say.

Is this the most informative essay ever written about how to write a story for Literotica? Er, no. Of course not. :-) But if you take it as a, "hey, why don't you have a go?" piece, it does the job very well indeed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha!

You and samuelxxx should have co-written this little ditty, you have the same amount of talent, ooooo. What a waste of space you are.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Are you kidding? Or just what are you on now?

From a writer who has one "H" in over 200 tries - Are you really encouraging others to be as good as you could be?<P.

You could be more than you choose to be so you have no credibility or reader respect. Were you to change more toward some of life's realities instead of the assinine without a brain copies of crap perhaps you would feel better about yourself and us you.

YoursSINSerelyYoursSINSerelyover 14 years ago
Not very Helpful

This wasn't very helpful to me. Too bad I wasted my time reading it. If you think sex is just in and out motions, that must explain all of your other stories being so blah. Try Shift F7 for a change.

BOSTONFICTIONWRITERBOSTONFICTIONWRITERover 14 years ago

I loved this story. I've learned so much from this 850 word How To story. Now, finally, I'll know who to write a story for Literotica.

Boy, I was wrong about you, Bakeboss. All this time, I thought you wrote little shitty stories and that you were a shitty writer. You have proven me wrong with this story.

Pardon me, but I must read this again and again and commit it to memory. I printed it out and have it posted beside my keyboard.

I only wish I had this story before. Definitely, I'd be a much better writer with the help of this great How To story.

Thanks for this story, Bakeboss. You are, by far, the best writer on this site, in the whole wide world, even.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago

It's insulting and oxymoronic for you, the champion of shitty 800 word stories, to dare write How To Write For Literotica. I dare say this story should have been posted in the Humor Category because it's funny.

Were you serious when you wrote this or is this a joke? Or don't you really care what the Hell it is you write, so long as you score a point in the Survivor Contest and win your lousy $500.

Why bother?

You insult those writers who take pride in what they write. Certainly, we don't need someone like you to tell us how to write for Literotica. We just have to read what you write to know how not to write for Literotica.

If anything, you could take a lesson from any one of several hundred writers here, those who don't write crappy little stories, just for the sake of winning the Survivor Contest.

Have you no shame? Don't you take any pride in what you write?

Tell me, what do you get out of this? Does anyone seriously read what you write? You've been writing stories here for 3 years and you've yet to learn anything. If anything, you're getting worse instead of better.

Have you written any story that has a plot and character development?

The fact that you're a woman masquerading as a man fools no one, Erin, sorry, I mean, Bakeboss.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I think it depends

On who is reading and approving your submission for posting. I've read some stories which wouldn't pass a 5th Grade English standard.

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