All Comments on 'I Want to Play a Game'

The story and plot are fairly good. Not to sound at all discouraging, but you might want to proofread the next installment a little more. Having said that, I look forward to the next installment. Oh, and physical descriptions of the girls and the sensations and actions would add to a good story

A group of people find themselves locked up and have to cooperate in order to survive and escape.

Can't wait to see the next section!!

I agree that a few more descriptions to enhance the images of these women would be good. Especially the sensations the two felt as the machines worked them into their sexual frenzies.

I am looking forward to additional posts.

Thanks for your efforts.

Charleybear

Its just like SAW all over again

I Agree with the Previous writer it sounds Like SAW with Sex instead of Death. But Overall very Entertaining. Keep the Story Going.

A nice spin on the revenge theme; a thinker rather than a quick pull job. The reader is free to think through some of the ramifications. (The answer is easier to find with four than three, or with three than two; but it should be at least plausible for one girl remaining in 'original condition' to spring the lock.) Like many of the (best) stories here, the writer's enthusiasm is a very nearly adequate substitute for good copyediting. Still five stars.

I want to read more..

Where is the rest of the story,I want to know how it ends!!!

The story is already meeting my expectations. I would do anything to see the next part of this.

~ by さくら女児 from ToukouCity