All Comments on 'I Want to Play a Game'

The story is already meeting my expectations. I would do anything to see the next part of this.

~ by さくら女児 from ToukouCity

Where is the rest of the story,I want to know how it ends!!!

I want to read more..

A nice spin on the revenge theme; a thinker rather than a quick pull job. The reader is free to think through some of the ramifications. (The answer is easier to find with four than three, or with three than two; but it should be at least plausible for one girl remaining in 'original condition' to spring the lock.) Like many of the (best) stories here, the writer's enthusiasm is a very nearly adequate substitute for good copyediting. Still five stars.

I Agree with the Previous writer it sounds Like SAW with Sex instead of Death. But Overall very Entertaining. Keep the Story Going.

Its just like SAW all over again

I agree that a few more descriptions to enhance the images of these women would be good. Especially the sensations the two felt as the machines worked them into their sexual frenzies.

I am looking forward to additional posts.

Thanks for your efforts.

Charleybear

A group of people find themselves locked up and have to cooperate in order to survive and escape.

Can't wait to see the next section!!

The story and plot are fairly good. Not to sound at all discouraging, but you might want to proofread the next installment a little more. Having said that, I look forward to the next installment. Oh, and physical descriptions of the girls and the sensations and actions would add to a good story