by Middleagepoet
If he didnt want the activity there all he had to do was say excuse me this is appropriate, put on your clothes and start walking. To stand, watch, and film is criminal.
enjoyed the whole thing. No kidding, I laughed all the way through it. A fun piece and I thank you, sir.
I think you need something more substantial than the cursory story you decided to submit. The only credit you deserve is for the uniqueness in both presentation and idea. However, if the idea is very <i>shallow</i>, then your story is not ideal. I agree with the previous posters-- I don't know why this was an editor's pick either.
A bit too dry. Perhaps you should have stopped with the first report