All Comments on 'On the Beach Ch. 18'

Thank You Kathi, for telling a very probable tale. The incest thing was a bit too kinky for me; but I'm not here to judge what runs through the mind of others yet doesn't run through mine.

You seem to be telling the story from Bill's point of view rather than Murphy's. The part where Bill lies to the beautiful lifeguard saying, about Murphy "we're only friends" was so ~ typically what men say when trying to get into "new" panties.

You're interested Reader,

Ron

i like the fact she is playing on his fetish...good woman.

The psychological twist...mother/son role play... is totally appropriate given the age differences.

You have kept my interest for each chapter and I look forward to the next chapter every night. Keep up the great stories!!!