by Wannabe Chick
Ready for chapter 3! Hope both girls take peters ass and jenny moves in and they all have a baby together.
You so need to carry on with this story. I have just found both chapters today and would love to know what happens.
It was Awesome .. I have had sex with a he she n i was dressed up in my sexy blk lace panties blk lace bustier stockings n blk strappy heel..we kicked back on my bed ewtching a porno bnext thing i rubbing her buldge thebi started to pull her shorts down revealing a nice sexy blk cock..i went crazy ..attacking it till it was hard n she told me to get on my hands n knees n slid her 9 inch cock in my ass ..oh goodbit felt great ..
That would be the Taj Mahal then.
Or was she sighing at the beautiful sight?
Very good
I hope you do write a chapter 3, the wife and Jenny getting closer, The husband and Jenny, the husband and wife getting closer. Finally the 3 of them getting closer. Maybe Jenny fucking the husband.
You also have a 3 way spitroasting party too...LOL
I enjoyed it
Thank You
Evidently, your characters so enjoyed removing young Jenna's blouse and bra, they did it twice. lol
You wrote:
"...pushing the blouse away, letting it fall to the floor... Jenny reached behind her back and unclasped the white bra she was wearing."
Then, a few paragraphs later, you wrote:
"The girl removed herself from the woman's breasts long enough for Shawna to pull the blouse off over her head. ...Jenny's breasts through the white fabric of her bra... ...before reaching behind the girl's back and unclasping it."
Oops...
Both Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 in this are AMAZING, and I soooo hope you do more with this storyline !!!
I enjoyed your story since i have fantasized about having a threesome with a transgender person.
Well written, so much for their proclaimed love for hubby. Happy that they found what they really needed from each other. Not much point in reading anymore because all that remains is the mercy threesome for hubby & contempt that follows
Yeah. Its always a bout the woman, now that Shawna and Jenny have had their marathon romp in the sack neither woman actually needs Peter. With Shawna letting Jenny fuck her with no protection I can only contemplate Shawna getting pregnant by Jenny.
as much as there are some"nice" parts of this story, cheating is still cheating!
The virgin ass should have been saved for her HUSBAND.....dumb bitch, lol
bill.....5sssss
hot hot hot
It doesn't make sense that shawna would use a dildo if peter is downstairs. It seems really redundant. A bit of a waste really. What was the point of telling peter that this has to be between the two of them if the babysitters still gonna take it up the ass? That seemed pointless. Also the fact that both of them are cheating on eachother sounds like they should just get a divorce. Nothing about this story made sense to me.
Great story and looking forward to chapter three.
One little screw-up with Jenny already having removed her shirt and bra and having Shawna ravish her tits before Jenny climbed up on the bed and then Shawna removing them again later.
Other than that, it was hot. Can't wait to read about the inevitable threesome!
It was absolutely delicious! I hope you start writing again!
You have created a story that should last for many, many more chapters including all sorts of playful, seductive, and orgasmic results. Looking forward your amazing writing talents.
I disagree this was as hot if not hotter than the first. Can't wait till Chapter 3 when the threesome begins?
Wow this has to happen to me in real life
there is much to tell and experience. It's only the beginning. Well done and please write fast. Lots of us are anxious...............
A great follow up, only real flaw is that you didnĀ“t tell us about a threesome. Well you kinda did but I hope that comes in the next chapter if you write one. Write one!
A little disapointed in the fact that his wife and jenny wouldn't let him join in.After all she already slept with her co-worker.It wasn't like he got to sleep with hers,That said Fantastic story! Please another chapter?Maybe have them both service him as an apology for cock blocking him.
I liked the first one better... But this is pretty good too...
i cant wait for more. this story is my dream......i only wish my husband and I could find a Jenny. thanks for some lovely climaxes.
i love this story there needs to be a chapter 3 please don't leave us hanging
I love your writing. It tells a great story along with a fantastic sexual description.
Tender and erotic, and utterly arousing. Great storytelling filled with the valleys and crescendos of great sex! I love it ... and thank you.
I have always been bisexual since early childhood I had always wanted to wear the pretty little dresses the girls in the neighborhood wore, my mother sewed most of my older sisters things and I always was bugging her to make me something with the pretty pinks, lavender or violet colors but for the most part she would not do that. I love eating pussy, I love sucking cock and swallowing cum, I enjoy licking the cute little butt holes of my partners, and to this day the use of vaseline has always made my 7 1/2 inch cock rise up and wanting me to jackoff with it. I hope there will be more of this story later.
great story just so sexy think i want to join this party and cant wait for part three
great story and ill be wating to hear more of there adventures iam sure it will get much hotter xxxxx
I read both chapters and I think the story is awesome. Your characters are well developed and it is a very smooth read. I am really looking forward to hearing more about the relationship as it develops.
Dave
The three of them have so many adventures ahead of them. What the heck, invite friends and have an unexpected orgy....
Incredible writing. Keep writing
I didn't think the story could get any better and then it went supernova WOW... I hope there will be many more chapters your characters are so well rounded and involved with eachother..
This is am amazing story,
What a unique & beautiful relationship these 3 are going to have,
There has to be Ch3 where jenny fucks Peter.
More more
It is so horny, oh to have the opertunity to be with am 18yr old Tgirl
I read chapter 1 and chapter 2. When I saw that chapter 2 was about a ts on f, I was a little put off but as I continued reading, I have to say that this was the better chapter.
I love the visuals and the caring characters. There is so much more to sex that just fucking and you manage to capture that.
Brookell
I have enjoyed this series a lot, and I hope you have the chance to revisit it soon.
This is one of the best stories I have read on this site. You are a terffic writer. I loved the story, it touched on three of my biggest fantasies, ladyboys and babysitters.
Please continue the series.. there are so many great ways this could go with the wife, husband and babysitter.
Bravo, more please
great imagery and action. I love writing on this subject too. Fun!
I loved this story, and I love this series. I'm eagerly awaiting the 3rd installment!!!
I know quality takes time, but I sincerely hope you are working on the continuing story of Jenny, and or any of your other TS series - they're the best I've read on this site, or elsewhere for that matter! Thanks for writing them all!
You have written such a tender and passionate story of sexual awakenings. I can honestly say that I can relate to the characters especially Jennny. I hoe that you will continue to write fantastic love stories like this. I give this story three tissue boxes up!
It's about damn time! Glad to see you're back and writing again. Great continuation to this story, and I'm looking forward to the third installment!
I'm pleased that you have returned and continued submitting your work to Literotica. I really enjoy reading all your stories and hope you will finish Sisters' Secret. Keep up the good work.
I'm soooo happy for a new story and even better, a continuation! I'll be checking in for the next chapter.
Another super sexy story from my favourite writer!! A big FAN here of all your stories. It's been such a long time.. Thank you.. Can't wait for the continuation of the sister's secret!
Thank you!
this was a great description of one of my most enjoyed fantasies...i can't wait until the family threesome happens and the girls both show him what he's missing.....maybe even a double penetration for hubby :) ....was really super hot for me...you did a great job and i'm patiently waiting for chapter 3
One of the best transexual/family/love stories i have ever read.It was full of erotic moments and it seemed so real. No one had a nine inch dick or huge tits, just ordinary and loving people having a sexually gratifying time. Please continue with this sexually charged story.
i cummed all over my crossdresser self when i read this
i love to be penetrated and i hope i get a transsexual like Jenny