All Comments on 'The Checkout Girl 03'

excellent writing. Loved it. Keep it up please.

I really enjoy this story and although I'm not a fan of BDSM, this chapter was rough and kinky and sweet all at the same time - good job.

Some of the most erotic, well written experience of new lesbian love I've ever read. I was totally turned on throughout. Made me want to cum and cum again.

one of the hottest i've read. played fucked and spanked my own pussy. thank you

oh my god!!!!!! that was great and i'm not even a lesbian i just read it because the other stories were amazing but i have to say it was pretty damn good!!!!!!

loved it !!!!

just want to congratulate u

Loved every word of it, and I am still panting. Highly erotic and I can't wait for their further adventures. I will never look at check-out girls the same way again! Excellent writing ynona, well, well done ... you can do no wrong in my eyes.

Just wanted to tell you what a hot read this is keep going

I certainly hope you continue with this AMAZINGLY hot, sexy, romantic, loving story.

This is so hot! Damn it, there has to be many, many more chapters to come; please?

I am going to have to look more closely at the checkout chicks. I love your story; please write lots more I do hope Angie and Jenny have much more than a weekend.

Loved your story. Great plot