by Charles Petersunn
Really enjoyed this, as well as the quite splendidly effusive degree of pun-making.
Great to have so much hot sex - and I would prefer the story to have a little more substance.
Loved the story. A few proof reading mistakes where he should have been she, etc.
oh, my, what a marvelous trip down (or up?) Memory Lane. Thank you!
Great story, as always, but the cornhole puns got a little excessive...
What a joy to remember Nina Hartley as I first watched her, back in the 80s, and to read this delightful story.
Its damn hard to pull off humor and eroticism. Typically a messy job, at which you have excelled. All puns intended.
i really enjoy "cornholing" too, and with a willing lady, one can really expand the fun
Well written but overly long. Lots of anal and the enjoyment thereof.
you could find a better name. Reasonable story however.
I just didn't like some things. The way he pretty much ONLY said 'cunt'. 'Cunt' can work as a special alternative, something that someone will see and have a short shock-effect that'll be good. When you have him constantly saying 'cunt', it looks boring and unsexy.
And the fact that on top of saying 'cunt', he would say in dialogue 'goodness' and 'darn' and 'gosh'. Just not believable.
But a nice story.
(What can I say, I love the subject matter.)
Please keep writing!!!
Not like what?? Seems pretty good to me. Know get a good opportunity to speak to my husband.
Well-crafted,,,lots of clver ideas and salacious naivvety....SO glad Nina got it twice and will probably be getting it MUCH more....Such dedication on the part of the Doc and the Prof!! Keep up the good writing!!
on an anal adventure. I and I'm sure many others have had a similar feeling of sex and playing around with the diddling fingers in a car with others going to an event, but this was well done with the build up and climax (those gushing explosions that Charles provides are a bit much) and, particularly the involvement of Dr. Lowenstein. As usual Charles has provided a story full of intimate detail about the occasion and the characters that helps to paint a visual image and an erotic one at that. And, as usual, the story seems ripe for an encore or two - so many different directions that he could go with the characters and the situations. To think that this is the last of his stories for me to read unless he provides more (after March 25, 2010) leaves me empty. I left this until last because I'm not a real fan of anal sex, but this was not just a story about butt plugs and wham, bam, be my sex slave, ma'am. The characters had some dimension - we got to know them and feel their experiences. Charles does such a good job in storytelling that I hope there will be many more. Thank you, Charles, for a nice ride - I hope to be on the train or car when it next pulls out.
Mr Petersunn,
That was a terrific story! I just loved the scene(s) in the car! can we have more? I specially like the image that there was just her skirt covering up all the action. And the position, with her sitting up on his lap -- dynamite writing!!
I love that Dr. Lowenstein got it up her ass - please continue with her!!
A nice variety of sexual acts too! Be careful of name changes -"Allen" for "Nina" on the last page. Also, it would have been fun to read about Dr. Lowensteins sexcapades with the sleep deprived student!