All Comments on 'The End of Innocence'

That as very hot! You two should write together more. Thanks for sharing this

Yeah, you've got the co-writing thing down; the flow back and forth between mind to mind made it work. And fuck it reminds me why I like kinky smut. Violent, hot, pain and all the emotions rattled into a little box and poured out over apprehensive characters.

You hit all the like buttons for me. Verrry nice.

Thanks so much for posting this it was a great read.

A great read. Wow i loved the way she gave it to him Thank you!

I can never understand why, when a female is giving a male his first fuck, she opts not to look him in the eye, face to face. In the missionary position, she can not only make gentle love to him but also rough fuck him silly after his initial sweet seduction. But then this is your story, not mine. Oh and as I mentioned, it's a great story. Thanks for sharing ...