All Comments on 'The Taking of Nathalia'

I have recently meet 3 ladies that make me feel this way

I like the way they felt it was kismet when they first met. That immediate chemistry really made the submission work for me as a reader. I really liked the tone and language changed between the two scenes based on the type of sex from pussy to fuckhole. Nice touch. Your characters have a unique voice. You really get in their heads. I wanted to hear more.

The sex and the BDSM was good, you really gotinto those characters heads.

A bit slow to start but the bondage was great. I loved the description of him sticking his fingers in around the dildo, and when he fucks her when she has the butt plug insider her.

Great fucking story, a bit mushy with good sex scenes

This story is okay.