All Comments on 'The Vegas Adventure Ch. 04-06'

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Anonymousalmost 19 years ago

Great Mind Control Story!

Unlike lots of stories on this and other sites - you draw the reader deep within the characters and make them so real. Can't wait for the next installment.

CurtisNeeley almost 16 years ago

Loved it - - hurry up and write more please :-)

waiting for the next portion is such pleasant torture...

Anonymousalmost 15 years ago

Vegas Adventure Blues

Been to Vegas,bought the T shirt.(Been there done that.) Thought I saw everything but I never left the strip. While acknowledging the story is fiction it offers food for the imagination when you look at some of the personal adds in the Vegas area. Great Job!!!

Anonymousalmost 15 years ago

HE HAS TEETH DOESN'T HE

HE SHOULD HAVE USED HIS TEETH AND BIT IT OFF

Writer2000 over 5 years ago

Very good!

I enjoyed this. The story line is good and the writing is much improved since I read an earlier story.

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I love to be aroused by the thoughts in my mind. Combine that with the ideas from someone else's mind and soon I end up constantly motivated to make the erotic dream better. Some of those dreams become stories. I am haunted by an idea until I get it on paper. If it causes ...

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