All Comments on 'The Villain'

CWE is the perfect acronym to describe this story. Creative, well written and erotic. Hope to read you again soon and my gratitude for sharing this tale.

Good work! One of the most enjoyable I've read in quite a while.

that was an excellent story. it worked so well for me!

Well written, erotic, subtle and powerful. Proof the the most powerful erogenous zone is the mind and imagination.

Well done, I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

JezWolf

This is first-rate. You clearly know enough about the science to make this work. You write with assurance and clarity. Kudos!

Truly well done. Believable science, excellent covering on the social stances, and simply amazing descriptive ability. Honestly, i could not pick a single aspect of this story to call the 'best'. Were i currently in possession of a hat, i would tip it to you.

Was expecting torture or something like it, but was pleasantly surprised