All Comments on 'Thinking About You'

I like it very much. You captured the feelings real good, and her forgetting the passing of the time was a great end. Good work!

The writing is good, but there's no point, no reason to continue reading. It's more like a diary entry than a story. Sorry.

...and evocative. Not a fully formed piece, but an interesting slice of life.

Please post more ;-)

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sweet story hun. nice job.

Touching act of reminiscence. It's amazing how one photo can conjure up so many memories.

Just a scene out of a typical day. Not much happened. Oh well.

Well no, there are no guns, no tricked out SUVs, no duct tape, no rope, no revenge, no anger, no testosterone etc etc. In other words, a perfect day and a heartwarming, romantic episode instead. We all need more of this, do we not?