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GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 12 years ago
Wow,

that was intense. Anonymous, primal, and emotionally charged, this was great work.

I just have to add one thing for your future writing. You kept saying 'message' when you were describing 'massage.' It made for a couple funny images, but didn't really distract me.

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