All Comments on 'Willing Subject Ch. 02'

Wow, a photographers Dream assignment!..sex all round!

Sexuallytitilating.

More…more!

Beejay3

Maybe more girl on girl and some cream pie eating by the girls or the boys.

Great hot writing Justine...surely one of this growing group has a mature lady friend who has admitted shyly that she has never had photographs of herself as a younger woman---she'd make a fine story, bashful, voluptuous, and aroused by the camera's erotic eye,,,,,,,,,,

I think you need to tell us about the last two hours and "every possible combination".

jus8tine

your story was good, and could have been great!!!!

like your preceding story.

i'm a photographer, and you must have been a model.

Oh, i saw your profile picture, nice.

would like to hear about that shoot, or have been the lucky photographer.

i see you haven't wrote anything new in two years, whats up.

nyc/guy

The last two sentences could have been expanded into at least another page. Details make it more realistic.

improve your volcabupussy

but, as somebody else said, somewhat tame, and anti-climatic. Decent stroke story, and pretty good mechanically, but with a couple of errors.

Jus*tine! Great concept and plenty of photographic detail; the sex was good and high on the stroke stakes, or wet pussy stakes for me. Too tame an end, - there you had 4 beautiful healthy adults on the bed and you finished the whole thing off in two short paragraphs. Many thanks anyway xx Sammy

People enjoying fucking that is a great story. Man I would love to see the photo's from a shoot like that I am sure it is a Earl Miller type of expose'.