All Comments on 'Wizard Ch. 10'

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CountryRock33CountryRock33almost 3 years ago
Length of Story

Well I prefer longer chapters.😇 . I say write them as long or as short as you like. You are the one taking time out of your life to entertain us by writing this story. So thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

My 2 cents

Still 5/5 stars. I don't mind the chapters without the sex. You have to move the story along and although the sex is exciting, it is only part of the story (my opinion). I look forward to reading more. If people complain about the story, how much did they pay for it? Thanks for your time and your imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I suspect that what you suspect is correct.

They want to read more of the story. So do I, but I also know that I can wait and read several chapters at once if I really wanted to. Apparently not as much as I want to gobble up the latest.

Teacher44Teacher44almost 3 years ago

You're the author, you set the pace. Sure, I'd like to read more because it is interesting, but I am willing to wait.

MimiRayMimiRayalmost 3 years ago

These chapters will always be too short, simply because the story is so compelling and well written.

I'm not complaining, merely whining. You keep doing what's best for you, I'll keep reading. And true, not every chapter needs a sex scene. Even we sex addicts need time to do other things once in a while.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

It IS a great story, you keep posting as long a chapter and as fast as you can. Just remember most of us that want more are Fans. I for one love the setting, the charcters and that Damn Imp is a Treasure. LoL. If there are before books in the verse of yours I never read them. Perhaps on the next thunderstorm day? Thnx Phineas

nthusiasticnthusiasticalmost 3 years ago

Ignore Complaints

We may be greedy, but we’re still grateful for whatever crumbs you toss our way. Thank you.

(I’ve also tried to let several chapters accumulate in order to facilitate my subsequent binge, however my cravings won’t let me …)

maddictmaddictalmost 3 years ago

Wicked story. I'm not sure I've caught the very beginning of John's story. I started when John didn't know who he was, and I might of missed the last chapter. It's hard to keep up on Literotica, if they had a follow list. $$$$

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

too short

SuggestionSuggestionalmost 3 years ago

Good story. When the man opened the door, it got a little confusing as to who was doing what. Be careful with pronouns when there are a large number present. I read it over a couple times and still did not get it clear. A good editor will catch these things for you.

You have a good style. You are right to release it at a pace that you are comfortable with. For a serial like this, your chapter length is not unreasonable.

Keep up the good work.

BigotedeFocaBigotedeFoca5 months ago

Nice work. Like you say, you’re driving we’re just passengers, drive on.

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