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Thanks for the feedback florbust and Mr_coater. Chapter 38 is in the cue.

6.5 stars. I don't agree with everything you wrote, but it was excellent- and honest. Jim handled it well, not like I or a lot of other guys would, but then this story does that. she deserves more shit, more retribution. maybe the truth will come out, maybe a class action lawsuit...

I worked at a hospital for many years and back in the old days it wouldn't be too uncommon to hear about a couple of staff getting caught doing the dirty deed. Depending on their status it might be overlooked or not and one or both parties would be gone. The Doc did have a lot to...

I would like to read a second chapter where her husband had invited her family for some celebration and now they all heard what she did. It's a racial story and I hope both the cheaters get punished.

My god, that's truly awesome.

Good story but the ending seemed rushed. Still 5*

Could it be that this is a chapter of the Paradise Bimbo Inn?

This was good but she must have a case for constructive dismissal. She was being pursued by a person in a superior position. Everyone seemed to know what was going on. I thought they would have consulted a solicitor - particularly when a second video surfaced showing he acted in self...

Decent plot however the ay the characters were fleshed out … I could not find a way to link to them. Felt like a version of the 3LB - Snicker, OMG, and HUH?

cute little swap tale, liked it! happy ending!

Seriously, him being a nice guy was the issue? This is such BS. I understand the concept they are referring to but men aren’t allowed to act like cavemen so why should women be allowed to act like cave women? Also he punched the guy because the guy threw a punch first.

The pause to improve the story was a good move. I only found this due to the re-release of chapter 1 This is an amazing space opera and I am looking forward to the coming chapters. Thank you for sharing your talent. 5 stars for all chapters.

Although the video didn't show the first attempted punch in the end it did cost him his job and damage his future. It would have been better read for me if a second video would have appeared showing the first failed punch and the conversation about the husband being an electrician...

You can forgive but you will never forget.

I guess some guys are slow learners. The bitch showed her true colors when she got up from the table to dance with Marc without even a "fuck off" for her husband. It was over right then, Jim was just too slow or too shocked to realize it. Your guy wasted an entire year of his life...

What a great piece of erotica. Great job of painting the awesome picture of the ultra erotic Ashley getting pounded by a huge black dick. Pretty sure I read this before but may not have left a comment. Well written and very stimulating. I didn't want to stop reading. Unless its alredy...

A creative story. Definitely unique. 4 stars.

Just like the other readers, I too would love to have my wife walk in and catch me sucking cock and getting fucked by 2 hot hunky men. Would be even better if she called me a "faggot" and said to me "I've always wondered if you are gay". I would respond "yes dear. I am gay and these...

Nice start !

Another great story!

Purlitzer ,…. really!?!? I missed that first time around. I suspect it was intentional, to bolster the lack of writing ability of your character.

Nobody could be so stupid, ignorant, and/or dumb! But I was because I read it through to the end. What a complete waste of time.

Congratulations on your collaboration. It’s wonderful! Sweet, predictable romances with happy endings are fairly common here, but yours is unusually well-written with likable, interesting characters, and it has the added element of great humor. It’s witty and fun from the title through...

This has moved along very well!!

Five Stars🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌋🌋🌋🌋🌋💯

Great story, just wish it continued further into their new relationship.

Please read the below comments for laughs. You can tell those men who aren’t married and are scared to death of a strong dominant woman. It’s a STORY! A story about trying to save a marriage and Jase agreed...

Love this series keep up the great writing

DELICIOUS!!!

A good story. A little vague on timelines as it seemed the events were close together occurring very quickly. My perception is that Lucia talked about love on what seems like their thirdish get together. At any rate it seemed rushed because of the lack of spacing.

I am enjoying your story, however the lack of spell check and/or 'no' for 'know' types of issues detract from flow of your tale.

I liked the story but not the ending.

Good premise and a must read!

Just gotta love the past comments by morons. Jase agreed to all of this to save his marriage due to his stupid decisions and actions…why would he file for divorce. If you can’t handle femdom…don’t read it!

5* Solid Story with the cheater finally understanding she burned herself. MC didn't need to pile on abuse which was cool.

Great story so far! Thank you for taking the time to write and share it with us.

I think it's a great start on what you have described as your goal. Looking forward to the rest.

Jim should have filed for divorce as soon as Linda came back home. She doesn't care about anyone but herself - not her husband, marriage, children or family. After months, she is sill not remorseful, much less accepting what she did was wrong. Instead, she gets a thrill remembering...