- Non-Erotic Poetry
- A bumblebee of poetry
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vocal
velvet wings
too small
to lift above
the page
grammar weak
and cliché built
too small
too trite
for screening
scholars
but you're
a bumblebee
of poetry
so you don't care
and soar
because
that is you
and all you know
I watch you rise
defying
common sense
and gravity
and fly
with other
bumblebees
to make love to
the reading roses
- COMMENTS
tazz317almost 12 years agoloading up for the return to the hive. TK U MLJ LV NV
Amyfriendabout 17 years agoimages spring forth after reading the words... different. Nicely done.
LeBrozover 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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duddle146over 17 years agoReading Roses ~ what a lovely metaphor for us readers. Loved the bright images.
