Love: Unrequited And Unspoken

I understand the depth of this poem...some are to shallow to see even their nose. But TN~ your words are your literary Art. Nice read...smiles.

Too much?

Here I read a skeleton.

Many writers are too verbose and need to trim and tighten.

This work seems to want a few words back to make it interesting.

The theme and meaning are clear.

It leaves nothing to wonder about,

but where is the enjoyment in reading it?

Where are the images in the mind,

the twist of a phrase?

Something besides an outline.