Nearing departure

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Dawn drive to you
Silhouetted skies
High beams hit highway
Tears cloud my eyes

Drawing nearer
Moving apart
You’ve grown up
It’s breaking my heart

Clear mountain’s crest
Spy the lay of the land
Your future before me
Out of my hands

Drawing nearer
Yet further apart
Someone else
Now holds your heart

Father’s day weekend
Absent phone call or card
Aware you’re leaving
Leaving me scarred

Time's turning wheels
Drive us apart
Our chapter is over
For you a new start

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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
very good...

...read. The meter stumbles a bit, but image is very strong and might have benefited from less formal structure. Quite enjoyable.

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