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Click hereAubergine, you bitter fruit that takes a night of leeching
before even vegans can really find you to their taste.
The almost-black shade of purple on your skin,
glistens, swollen and near to bursting,
like a violent bruise.
Threaten me no more with your engulfing hue
speaking of exotic flavors hidden
behind your smooth facade.
Is the white meat succulent
or a retching pastiness
on my tongue?
Aubergine, only experience
will tell.
so well written
such good words
quite nice visual arrangement
wasted on eggplant
but a good description
"retching pastiness'
I'm not familiar with the fruit, but you make it sound tasty. Thanks, nice work champ ;)
this was powerful
a captivating read..
i read your poetry now and feel kinda foolish going up against you..maybe because i didn't really know..lol
or i'm quite certain i'd have run for cover instead of shooting it out.
anyhow, i enjoyed this!