The Whisper In My Heart

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Gaucho
Gaucho
31 Followers

So soft
Your mouth in welcome
So quick
My beating heart
Your lips
Eclipse
My words before they
Start

So ripe
Your musky thistle
So swift
The nectar flows
Our needs
Accede
The time for joining
Grows

So lush
Your venus slipper
So snug
Our bodies mesh
You ride
Astride
My willing, swollen
Flesh

So rich
Your velvet quarry
So deep
My shaft descends
We mine
Refine
The wealth we ache to
Spend

So soon
The ardent moment
So sweet
Our little death
We plumb
Succumb
And drink love’s fervid
Breath

So moist
Your joyous outcry
So strong
My pounding blood
Our sighs
Reprise
The blur of rhythmic
Flood

So light
Your body, resting
So still
When fires depart
I hear
Revere
The whisper in my
Heart

Gaucho
Gaucho
31 Followers
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juicylipsjuicylipsover 19 years ago
I adore it

You create such breathless anticipation with your words.

Lalenya LoveLalenya Lovealmost 20 years ago
Flawless and erotic

Beautifully done! Please keep writing more great poems like this one.

Cheers,

Lalenya :^)

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Nice...

,,,read, and very interestingly structured and rhymed. Quite enjoyable.

GoddessOfSoulsGoddessOfSoulsalmost 20 years ago
*MMM*

Very erotic, I loved it

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
Great stuff

tasteful and erotic and a very cool rhyme scheme.

Nicely Done

Thank you

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