the buck

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under
the half glow
of the half moon
the buck sleeps
alone

...he stops and smells
muscles twitching
the doe-musky air
beguling bewitching...

under
the half glow
of the half moon
the buck dreams
alone

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
The 'Buck' stops here...

and the Doe stops there..separate dreams..

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
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I love you use of repeating sounds, always subtle but well placed, intentional. Now I want to go camping and sleep under the stars

BlueskyBeautyBlueskyBeautyover 19 years ago
lovely

as does the doe.

enjoyed this very much!

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 19 years ago
Very fine

simple poem. I like the repeating phrase and the feel. Nice words.

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