Saying Goodbye..

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So soft
the brief touch of your lips
on my cheek.

Was I almost intruding?

"Look after yourself "
should have been
"I love you!"

Then the Jumbo flew over
my head
and I shouted my love
above the roar
and thundering thrust

. . . as if you'd hear.

Through the clouds in my eyes
I watched you fly away
and wished I'd been born with wings.

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DeepAsleepDeepAsleepover 19 years ago
I hate standing

in the terminal, hand pressed against the window.

I liked this. Thank you.

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
Your poem

has been mentioned on the poetry review thread

sandspikesandspikeover 19 years ago
No good goodbye

Your poem made me think of a couple of songs. Leaving on

a Jetplane and Daniel. Thats the reason I love it. I'm

sorry he ain't coming back. Not the greatest poetry form

but straight fom the heart, hey there's another song.

GOOD JOB!

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