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Click herelife's irregular beat
crashing high...
then low
rhapsody with an ebb
voyage of light and darkness
constant beat of the winds
blowing us away and back
release your sins in the salt
partner of tequila and redemption
crests of hope and salvation
between troughs of darkness
Join the twelve fisherman
revival by the sea
undertow sweeps us out
faith floats us back
did I miss this the first time through?
"tequila and redemption"
I wish I had thought of that.
A deep water poem. Great work.
"release your sins in the salt
partner of tequila and redemption"
I don't even know what to say, Sandy. This was so evocative, moving, powerful. Does 'wow' sum things up?
May I be so bold to suggest that in my humble opinion I think this is your best piece to date?