- Erotic Poetry
- Late Evening Breeze
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Click hereLate Evening Breeze
By
Pervetta
8/27/04
Clandestine murmurs glide by on the breeze of a late summer night.
Soft, subtle touches like the brush of a feather on the inside of a thigh.
Sliding slowly, lazily back and forth.
Dark eyes darting at the slightest distraction.
Fear of being found out fluttering inside her breast like a captured bird.
His hand calming her with his caresses as he pulls her into him.
A lingering farewell kiss as they part.
A blown kiss catching and meeting on the late evening breeze as they part on that late summer night.
- COMMENTS
sandspikeover 19 years agocrap another prose piece hiding out in poetry land. Then
I realized the longer lines were hiding the two of you from
my prying eyes. I think you got some good advice in the
first two posts, but it is a meaningful read to me.
WickedEveover 19 years agoHi, the poem has potential. There are some very nice lines:
Clandestine murmurs glide by on the breeze of a late summer night.
A blown kiss catching and meeting on the late evening breeze
jd4georgeover 19 years ago...and this could become quite lovely.
