- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Tomorrow I will be with my poems
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Tomorrow I will be with my poems.
They called me last night
and promised they would be here.
We will have a grand reunion.
We will celebrate under the stars
with sausage and biscuits and beer.
There will be laughter and tears.
I may get drunk and confess
that it was all my fault.
And you will be laced in grace,
but you will leave a mark wet and
full of the taste of teasing salt.
- COMMENTS
Catalina Friscoover 19 years agoI like the end rhyme. It made me feel your rhythm without being too forceful
BooMerengueover 19 years agoAre your poems all written for just one person and is that person coming? Thats what I got... Thanks
jd4georgeover 19 years ago...if you moved the first line to the end of the poem, adjusting the line breaks to keep the same verse form?
I ask, because the way it stands right now, the poem didn't seem to "earn" the title. I would also add a comma to the title, right after "Tomorrow"... making the reader pause.
