Hot Moon

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sultry she stalks
exuding heat
rolling her hips
distracting porch-reclined men
who’ve come out for a smoke
hoping to catch a whispered breeze
but only catch their breaths

skirt slit to hip
surreptitious glimpse
of dangerous thigh
bound in lace
deadly darts of heels
echoing footfalls
like ice picks on concrete

roses nod at her passing
but their bright fire,
soft love-laced fragrance
are not her quarry this night
she longs to fill
more than her spirit
she seeks a magick dark
and hard as her desire

street lamp’s out
but a stifled moon rides
undulating hills
to lay her hungry path

Earth Mother imprisoned
in labyrinth of asphalt and stone
haunting the streets in her need
her primal need

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8 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wow!

Very sexy!

sandspikesandspikeover 19 years ago
She'e a Lady, OH OH OH She's a Lady

I found this one pleasing to the eye as well as other

parts of the body. It read well and turned my head.

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
I think it speaks to the whore in us all!

I liked this read, and concur with the preceding comments. One of my favorite lines is one of the softer:

roses nod at her passing

but their bright fire,

soft love-laced fragrance

are not her quarry this night

PatCarringtonPatCarringtonover 19 years ago
very well done.

this is nicely written, and has some heat to it / i suspect it would have been easy to let this fly away from you as you were writing / but you maintained control to the end /

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
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Tastefully erotic. I should've known that you do a hott, hot moon poem for June. Fab work ;)

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