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Asaba

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Kaishaku
Kaishaku
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Asaba

     Tasting her
cardamom-spiced kiss
          I felt a tremble
    as I removed her asaba
   and ran my fingers
through her long
                black hair.
 
 
 

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I seriously love how you slice the lines in your poems. You just break everything up, and it should come off choppy but instead it's really organic and raw.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Love

A little snippet having to do with a thing called love.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Simple, sensuous, steamy...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Cool

What a great poem. Simple but effective. I loved the image you pianted in this poem. Sensuous, rich and delicate. Nice one.

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