- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Autumnal Equinox
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A day faded but not cold
at the end of summer
a day as if
without the patience to sustain day
and only on an outburst
or an impetus
void
of duty, but full of irony
brings light to a day, in the end
like me
or like my heart
at the end of summer
a heart that's void
not of impetus
but of seeking, in the end
a heart faded but not cold
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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LeBrozover 17 years agoAn interesting metaphor, the heart's feelings as lacking in fire as the autumnal equinox; imparting a sense of uselessness, almost despair.
